sick of dirt

[Ka0t1c]

feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=111002&p=1573599#p1573599


i'm sick of dirt being kicked at me
and it hurts seeing pricks happy on this earth
so i will work to fix things that are at a red alert
in my world worth risking, for better or worse

cuz instead i feel i am spinning back in reverse
now my head is getting dizzy, off track and un-nerved
but nobody said it was pretty, i guess you live and you learn
well, do you think i am ready, i really haven't the courage

yet still being steady, i'd gladly emerge
myself in to badly by building a lab from my splurge
and some tell me i'm nutty but that i'd rather prefer
than be a regular, buddy, i'm like an animal you cannot disturb

cuz my animate words start coming heavy by the canibus herb
it's just i am loving every single spelling of separate letter births
one after another and as always there's especially plenty to burn
so i cannot be stubborn, it's my silly putty, my planet, my turn

[Edge]

feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=111002&p=1573599#p1573599


i'm sick of dirt being kicked at me
and it hurts seeing pricks happy on this earth
so i will work to fix things that are at a red alert
in my world worth risking, for better or worse

cuz instead i feel i am spinning back in reverse
now my head is getting dizzy, off track and un-nerved
but nobody said it was pretty, i guess you live and you learn
well, do you think i am ready, i really haven't the courage

yet still being steady, i'd gladly emerge
myself in to badly by building a lab from my splurge
and some tell me i'm nutty but that i'd rather prefer
than be a regular, buddy, i'm like an animal you cannot disturb

cuz my animate words start coming heavy by the canibus herb
it's just i am loving every single spelling of separate letter births
one after another and as always there's especially plenty to burn
so i cannot be stubborn, it's my silly putty, my planet, my turn

some nice multis, some are more hidden by the structure. nice flow to it tho. good shit

[Ka0t1c]

Much appreciated, thanx for looking!

[Innovation]

Agree with Edge, some decent multi's in there but some are hidden by the structure.

Better drop than your last that I gave you feed on, and it wasn't half assed btw lol.

[GLed412]

I rapped it out and there were an absurd amount of multi's, and was also flowing really well from the first line for a while... good job

[Ka0t1c]

Thanx!