Anti-Gangster

[MikeNUFC]

Just some stupid shit I wrote pretty quickly.

Never had to sell drugs to help feed my sister
But I did take arnicha once to heal a blister
Never ran from the cops for shooting my gun at a safeden
But I did get a warning for chucking my gum on the pavement
Never saw a friend get killed in the rough parts of the streets
But I saw '3 Guys 1 Hammer', that stuff's hard to believe
Never needed to rob from a bank, cussing at clerks
But I stole 2 quid from my Mum to get the bus into work
Never had a murder record, killing people's low lives
But I do have a great online record on Fifa 09
Never been part of a gang, stabbed or shot in the chest
But did I cut my finger once, when cutting up cress
Never been broke enough to pray to no God (jeez)
But I did once for Newcastle to stay in the top league
Never played cards with my homies while smoking a blunt
But I do play scrabble online, drinking coke, having fun
I've never experienced your... "ghetto life", if you will
But my raps still outshine yours... strife don't mean skill

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[Edge]

i like the concept and the way u had the comparisons. some nice multis too... good structure and it flowed well

[Innovation]

Awesome concept. Rhyming was solid throughout as usual.

Fav lines:

Never had to sell drugs to help feed my sister
But I did take arnicha once to heal a blister

and

Never been broke enough to pray to no God (jeez)
But I did once for Newcastle to stay in the top league

Awesome work, Mike.

[WakeUpShow]

Awesome concept, dope rhyming and best of all it made me lol. nice job man.

[MikeNUFC]

Thanks guys

[Maybe]

The comparison style and concept was dope. The rhyming was great, and the flow actually works really well. I like how you word a lot of your stuff

Never ran from the cops for shooting my gun at a safeden
But I did get a warning for chucking my gum on the pavement
Never saw a friend get killed in the rough parts of the streets
But I saw '3 Guys 1 Hammer', that stuff's hard to believe
Never needed to rob from a bank, cussing at clerks
But I stole 2 quid from my Mum to get the bus into work
Never had a murder record, killing people's low lives
But I do have a great online record on Fifa 09

The part I quoted here is fucking hilarious. Straight fire man...


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[MikeNUFC]

Thanks a lot Maybe, I appreciate it.

[ArsheyHaq]

AHAHA you're a funny guy. A lot of clever wit throughout this piece my only complaint is that you only rhymed a line once. I was looking for internals, but didn't find any either. It's really good regardless Imma search for more of your stuff cuz of how much I enjoyed this one

"I've never experienced your... "ghetto life", if you will
But my raps still outshine yours... strife don't mean skill"

^^^I liked how you ended that^^^so true, so true! I couldn't agree more

[MikeNUFC]

^Thanks. I was actaully gunna try some internals but because of the structure of the piece I couldn't really fit any in without it sounding forced to be honest.

[classthe_king]

You better watch out, Xray might diss you now for not being street enough for Hip-Hop and being a nerd.


This was dope though, I lol'd

[VenomBlackViper]

Love the concept & the execution

Never had to sell drugs to help feed my sister
But I did take arnicha once to heal a blister
Never ran from the cops for shooting my gun at a safeden
But I did get a warning for chucking my gum on the pavement

Never needed to rob from a bank, cussing at clerks
But I stole 2 quid from my Mum to get the bus into work
Never had a murder record, killing people's low lives
But I do have a great online record on Fifa 09

My favorite parts.
You're easily one of my favorite writers on here.

[MikeNUFC]

Cheers fellas