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Second verse

Postby Mahmoud48 » Apr 23rd, '11, 15:50

to my new single thats coming out

niggas get mad when i hijack there studio set
killer threats is usless when im ruthless vet
the 5 figures i get make, make many upset
pulling the trigger with my middle finger to show, no mercy
man u know what hurts me the most
people think they can just walk on me like i was toast
but i will not crumble, my crumbs wont fall of this plate
its a mistake that we went on this date
cuz u know im the type of guy who kills on his first date
i aint sugar coating things but ur a looker and thats great
but shut up before i slap u in the fucking face
and i aint the type to wait, my mind wont deflate
i aint some sort of balloon u can form around
but when i pop i be there to make a sound
ODD FUTURE ASAP OVOXO BLACK HIPPY GOOD MUSIC
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Re: Second verse

Postby FreeSpeech » Apr 23rd, '11, 17:16

You're an idiot.

-You don't have a "single" coming, you have a song that you made in your bedroom that MAYBE a dozen people will ever listen to.
-You're not a vet, you're a little kid
-You rhyme date with date
-"people think they can just walk on me like i was toast
but i will not crumble, my crumbs wont fall of this plate"
^You don't walk on toast, that's an awful punchline. And you say you won't crumble, then why do you have crumbs?
-You don't make 5 figures off music, and that's not even impressive you moron, $10,00 a year is 5 figures.
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Re: Second verse

Postby Mahmoud48 » Apr 23rd, '11, 17:19

FreeSpeech wrote:You're an idiot.

-You don't have a "single" coming, you have a song that you made in your bedroom that MAYBE a dozen people will ever listen to.
-You're not a vet, you're a little kid
-You rhyme date with date
-"people think they can just walk on me like i was toast
but i will not crumble, my crumbs wont fall of this plate"
^You don't walk on toast, that's an awful punchline. And you say you won't crumble, then why do you have crumbs?
-You don't make 5 figures off music, and that's not even impressive you moron, $10,00 a year is 5 figures.

LMFAO that made me laugh
thats y i didnt vote for u , next year either
nah but for real the bold parts are fucking funny
ODD FUTURE ASAP OVOXO BLACK HIPPY GOOD MUSIC
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Re: Second verse

Postby VenomBlackViper » May 1st, '11, 08:21

:laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

This entire thing was so fucking stupid that it made me laugh for like 3 minutes straight, both your horrible lines & then Freespeech breaking them down. Fuck I was almost dying during that "you can't walk all over me i'm not toast" line.
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