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Bar Fight 2 (The Shots)

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Bar Fight 2 (The Shots)

Postby Spyder » Apr 26th, '11, 21:07

Im back in a Bar Fight, first track, prolly couldn’t handle that
Well stay tuned your in for a bumpy ride like camel back.
Camel toe to Camel pack, you thin white pussies smoked
In the Vagina Monologues, cause only pussies showed haha
Master Chief just disappeared off stage with a hat trick
See he choke when Spyder deep throat like giraffe neck
Call me your father, so bro it was smart to sit out of battle
Cause I Wil-Son like you Wood-row, without a paddle!
You come in the ring and you frontin rappin soft when
Ill leave you swingin at nothin like shadow boxin.
It happens often, generals best? Well yes we are
If you step lame you sit down forever your FDR!
Ya kick knowledge like polio while im on top of the earth
takin you out feet first, as if its opposite birth.
Not stoppin this curse louder than clap of thunder hits
Its my job to put pricks on point, acupuncturist.
Here Dracula comes with his, fangs to rip and mangle
Hang this kid and strangle, Anger spits in different angles.
I say your name in a drop, why would I sublime when
I got full bars anywhere, call my rhymes Verizon.
I see your life on the horizon, you lack the sound to speak
Sure you got fire, but whats a powwow without a Chief?
Hows this for boring, shits that’s what he tells some
If your gonna put me in a noose, just means im well hung!
Fa-Q told me that the future is only the past repeated…
Based on that, guess no response from Master Chief, shit.

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Re: Bar Fight 2 (The Shots)

Postby Spyder » Apr 28th, '11, 03:30

bump :unsure:
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Re: Bar Fight 2 (The Shots)

Postby Fa-Q » Apr 28th, '11, 04:11

SHOUTY IN A DISS!!!! LOVE IT....great diss....nobody likes that backstage clown :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:
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Re: Bar Fight 2 (The Shots)

Postby Spyder » Apr 28th, '11, 15:12

:smoking: oh if he responds hell get a diss
that was just some lines his way
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Re: Bar Fight 2 (The Shots)

Postby Master Chief » Apr 29th, '11, 00:54

Gee. I'm honored.

You dissed me because I said you are boring? Erm... ok lol. YOU ARE boring. I have nothing against you but you're just monotone and boring. Not my fault.

Fa-Q wrote:SHOUTY IN A DISS!!!! LOVE IT....great diss....nobody likes that backstage clown :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

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Re: Bar Fight 2 (The Shots)

Postby Spyder » Apr 29th, '11, 02:59

no i just took shots cause u no showed at the tourney

idc bout boring i just said that line in there
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Re: Bar Fight 2 (The Shots)

Postby _Steven_ » Apr 29th, '11, 03:50

Spyder wrote:Im back in a Bar Fight, first track, prolly couldn’t handle that
Well stay tuned your in for a bumpy ride like camel back.
Meh
Camel toe to Camel pack, you thin white pussies smoked
In the Vagina Monologues, cause only pussies showed haha
Meh
Master Chief just disappeared off stage with a hat trick
See he choke when Spyder deep throat like giraffe neck
Meh
Call me your father, so bro it was smart to sit out of battle
Cause I Wil-Son like you Wood-row, without a paddle!
Meh
You come in the ring and you frontin rappin soft when
Ill leave you swingin at nothin like shadow boxin.
Played
It happens often, generals best? Well yes we are
If you step lame you sit down forever your FDR!
Old reference
Ya kick knowledge like polio while im on top of the earth
takin you out feet first, as if its opposite birth.
Meh
Not stoppin this curse louder than clap of thunder hits
Its my job to put pricks on point, acupuncturist.
Played
Here Dracula comes with his, fangs to rip and mangle
Hang this kid and strangle, Anger spits in different angles.
Filler
I say your name in a drop, why would I sublime when
I got full bars anywhere, call my rhymes Verizon.
Played
I see your life on the horizon, you lack the sound to speak
Sure you got fire, but whats a powwow without a Chief?
Meh
Hows this for boring, shits that’s what he tells some
If your gonna put me in a noose, just means im well hung!
Good
Fa-Q told me that the future is only the past repeated…
Based on that, guess no response from Master Chief, shit.
Meh


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Filler = Needless
Played = Used to death
Good = Good

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Re: Bar Fight 2 (The Shots)

Postby Spyder » Apr 29th, '11, 23:20

thanks steven, i wanna put any "beef" we had aside
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Re: Bar Fight 2 (The Shots)

Postby Fa-Q » Apr 30th, '11, 00:12

Master Chief wrote:Gee. I'm honored.

You dissed me because I said you are boring? Erm... ok lol. YOU ARE boring. I have nothing against you but you're just monotone and boring. Not my fault.

Fa-Q wrote:SHOUTY IN A DISS!!!! LOVE IT....great diss....nobody likes that backstage clown :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

Oh look! An irrelevant member!

irrelevant? I have 3x your post count dumbfuck
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Re: Bar Fight 2 (The Shots)

Postby Master Chief » Apr 30th, '11, 00:21

Fa-Q wrote:irrelevant? I have 3x your post count dumbfuck

And you're still irrelevant.

Congrats.
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Re: Bar Fight 2 (The Shots)

Postby Fa-Q » Apr 30th, '11, 00:23

Master Chief wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:irrelevant? I have 3x your post count dumbfuck

And you're still irrelevant.

Congrats.

great argument :confusion:
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Re: Bar Fight 2 (The Shots)

Postby Spyder » Apr 30th, '11, 01:34

Chief why wont you respond to missing out of the tourney

this s the thread thread stating this

ant btw how am i monotone?
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Re: Bar Fight 2 (The Shots)

Postby Master Chief » Apr 30th, '11, 01:41

Spyder wrote:Chief why wont you respond to missing out of the tourney

this s the thread thread stating this

ant btw how am i monotone?

I didn't feel like writing and I was busy with the Writing Competition.
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Re: Bar Fight 2 (The Shots)

Postby Spyder » Apr 30th, '11, 01:51

ok


now cover the monotone point
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