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Of fuck, Class just got ethered! Hip hop world's blowing up!

Postby FreeSpeech » May 6th, '11, 03:50

Haha nah, I was bored and took like 15/20 minutes. And yes, personals >>>>> multis as far as disses go.

It’s time to teach this bitch ass rookie some rules
6 feet, I ditch Class like hooky in school
So sit back as I cook me a fool
You can bet I win, big cash, tell the bookies I’m cool
Lyrically, you the opposite of God like your prom date
Get it? She’s a dog, they should refund what your mom paid
“Who’s they?” Oh my bad, the escort service
That gave King a “queen” obviously less than perfect
Probably AIDS infested too, hope the sex was worth it
To go from pesky virgin to an infected person
Dog, you should call Immortal Tech, it’s urgent!
I’m fucking up the underground, and you just upset the surface
Underground? Mmmm nah, you a little below that
Pale as fuck with goofy teeth: you a pitiful mole rat
Why can’t you hear you suck? You got ears like an elephant
This queer’s melanin level’s even above his intelligence
Puffing and huffing, always been stuck in irrelevance
Class finds comfort in fronting like he’s something developing-
Into a sick MC, and see, it sickens me
That this prick indeed thinks he can begin to be
A legitimate artist, so Imma hit him the hardest
Class: all your life you been a literal target
A punching bag, they stole the lunch from this cocky kid
He’s ugly and jealous, no wonder he loves Copy’s shit
He tried to stall it, but the cool kids pried his wallet
They liked Jay-Z, so he hopped dick onto Diabolic
So, respond Class, that’s your only proper exit-
From this beef, c’mon, drop an Obama reference
Talk shit on Kanye, go and top my rhyme schemes
Lie and say I love Nicki, claim you got a dime piece
C’mon Class, shoot back and back what you talk
Or make like the backpacker you are and pack up and walk

Wish I could record it, sadly I have no mic :(
99% chance he makes some excuse (say I'm on his dick, say it's not worthy of his response, whatever) to not respond, when in fact he could take 15 minutes and write something, but oh well. Makes him look like even more of a lil bitch. No I'm not on his dick, I just figured it'd be fun and who better to diss than Class?
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Re: Of fuck, Class just got ethered! Hip hop world's blowing

Postby Satire » May 6th, '11, 03:52

Satire wrote:FreeSpeech never runs out of ideas to depict his opinion while making others insulting him feel so awkward in the process.


This still applies, also, beef belongs in the Backstage. Always ;)
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Re: Of fuck, Class just got ethered! Hip hop world's blowing

Postby Master Chief » May 6th, '11, 03:53

I approve this message. The black man stepping up to the red necros :smoking:
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Satirical Graphitical Productions.
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Re: Of fuck, Class just got ethered! Hip hop world's blowing

Postby classthe_king » May 6th, '11, 10:25

Yes, because it's AP testing weak and the first thing I want to do with my time is respond to some TEXT diss from some random ass dude who has a weird obsession with me.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Of fuck, Class just got ethered! Hip hop world's blowing

Postby Fa-Q » May 6th, '11, 10:35

This is sad... :unsure:
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Re: Of fuck, Class just got ethered! Hip hop world's blowing

Postby classthe_king » May 6th, '11, 10:38

C.R.E.A.M wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Yes, because it's AP testing weak and the first thing I want to do with my time is respond to some TEXT diss from some random ass dude who has a weird obsession with me.


If you responded back to this not Xray's diss then you're officially a pussy.

#justsaying

On-Topic : That was probably the best class diss i've heard/seen. :worship:


Not understanding sarcasm fail
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Of fuck, Class just got ethered! Hip hop world's blowing

Postby classthe_king » May 6th, '11, 10:42

C.R.E.A.M wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Not understanding sarcasm fail


Self-ether.


Using bandwagon word fail
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Of fuck, Class just got ethered! Hip hop world's blowing

Postby M15HKA » May 6th, '11, 10:44

this thread :facepalm
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Re: Of fuck, Class just got ethered! Hip hop world's blowing

Postby FreeSpeech » May 6th, '11, 14:30

FreeSpeech wrote:99% chance he makes some excuse (say I'm on his dick, say it's not worthy of his response, whatever) to not respond, when in fact he could take 15 minutes and write something, but oh well. Makes him look like even more of a lil bitch. No I'm not on his dick, I just figured it'd be fun and who better to diss than Class?

classthe_king wrote:Yes, because it's AP testing weak and the first thing I want to do with my time is respond to some TEXT diss from some random ass dude who has a weird obsession with me.

:coffee:
M15HKA wrote:this thread :facepalm

Show me one facepalm worthy line. Compared to that other wack diss, I dissed the hell out of class. If you aren't familiar with him, which you might not be, then you wouldn't get it...
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Re: Of fuck, Class just got ethered! Hip hop world's blowing

Postby WakeUpShow » May 6th, '11, 21:21

wow, this is actually great. Flow was on point, and this shit was PACKED with personals. Actually had me laughing a few times. good job, just work on rhyming.
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Re: Of fuck, Class just got ethered! Hip hop world's blowing

Postby Sam. » May 6th, '11, 21:27

a note worthy attempt
[Rollefsen] - SajN retired, bitch got old, unlike Sams "ladies".
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Re: Of fuck, Class just got ethered! Hip hop world's blowing

Postby ArsheyHaq » May 6th, '11, 23:40

Good rhyming, man :y: I like these latest diss pieces you've been doin' :D diss me next! diss me next! Haha.. anyway, keep doin' you and ignore all the hating you've been getting :coffee:
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Re: Of fuck, Class just got ethered! Hip hop world's blowing

Postby Drug.Ballad » May 7th, '11, 00:27

that was really good, you had some funny lines and all :y:
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Re: Of fuck, Class just got ethered! Hip hop world's blowing

Postby classthe_king » May 7th, '11, 01:42

There's a difference between being a bitch and not caring at all about you and not wanting to waste a second of time on your pathetic ass.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Of fuck, Class just got ethered! Hip hop world's blowing

Postby FreeSpeech » May 7th, '11, 02:09

classthe_king wrote:There's a difference between being a bitch and not caring at all about you and not wanting to waste a second of time on your pathetic ass.

Apparently you care enough to write a response saying you don't care, and to respond/argue with me in countless other threads... :coffee:

If you're so busy with AP testing, you can respond next week, no biggie. I assume if you spend a week writing, you can drop something half way decent. Who knows though? Right now, you're 0-2, pussy.
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