Welcome To Hell

[Atone]

i wrote 3 verses, it's going to be on my darker material album, basicly, it's in the thoughts of a serial killer, but the killer doesn't speak thru the song, instead you get a visual aid, it's going to be the intro song to the cd, that cd will be called "Atone: Welcome To My Nightmare"

here's the 1st 2 verses of it,

(Verse)
Tony went and gone mad- couldn't find the writing pad
thinkin of all the time's he had- when the people made him mad
he loves his mom- no he doesn't hate his dad
he just wishes death on the world- no thanx to all the girls
rejected him in high school- made fun of the crazy eye'd fool
crooked teeth and a broken beak- he's such a freak- he wants to die cool
end up on the news among the who's who in history
made a list to be- unforgotten and he's plottin with chemestry
wants to kick some ass- goes to get the axe
lighters and a match and he just sits and laughs
thinhkin of that bitch he wants to split in half
she was a fuckin whore- her life is so worthless
look at what she did to him- she fuckin deserves it
walkin thru the neiborhood havin conversations with himself
yellin at his shadow just speakin of all the things he felt
all the things he dealt- wishes he could watch some brains just melt
livin in a cold world- even he believes he would be better off in hell

(Beat)

(Verse)
Now what psycho in history ever glue'd his mouth shut
eye lids open like he just don't give a fuck
he can kill you- and refuses to tell you why
but he's gonna enjoy watchin every single second that you die
find's his ex girlfriends house and knock's on the door
just to visit- but he's gonna fuckin kill this whore
first he walks into her room- like any normal time
but just when she least's expect's it
shit's gonna get murderous and hectic
pretends to kiss her right before he rips off her left tit
smacks her in the face with it and brings out his death kit
she's screamin for help until he shoves a pen in her throat
haha- she was screamin bloody murder but now it's all she wrote
now he's pourin gas on that wound on her chest
and lights a match to see the fire in her breath
she says she never cheated- she was a liar til her death
no time to appologise bitch- she never had a chance to confess
now he's walkin away- smile on his face- like he's under a spell
can't say a word- he just has a tattoo on his forhead- welcome to hell


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[Atone]

Damn man, that flowed flawlessly, i ain't got nothing to say
rhymes are tough and the story can be seen .. storytelling was vivid

damn tough bro.

I recorded this with a 3rd verse, over the halloween movie them with a good bass line and heavy drums, sounds sick as fuck, and i didn't put a chorus, cuz my dark album isn't going t have alot of hooks and chorus's, just alot of story tellin, blood, and murder