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satire diss cuz hes a dumb nugga

Postby Aligator » May 10th, '11, 05:27

i might record it but i might not

easy when you test me, leslie.. i'll fuck your sisters bed sheets
wet dreams and sexy pictures of your mother in red fleece
covered in dead geese down pillows cut open at the top with my knife
im gonna stop it tonight after i murder you
stomp your skull til it fractures nice if i hafta ask u twice
to move over this crude soldier is proof boulders can shoot colver than ice is
i might be like this because your a white bitch that gave me lice lick
my nuts or get knifed kid
i fit in with the cutthroats and mean mugs
shoot me i eat slugs like free lunch from the garden
im sparkin heat by targeting your largest bee
get a buzz i'll knock u out da sky first with a wide herse
and five curses and hexes like harry potter does
im a potter yup, da way i mold nuggas like clay pieces
im da type 2 stay recent and mack on a broad for days keepin
her number tuck away where my gray jeans is
you better pray jesus will help u before i shelf u like a bad book
are you sad? look at me when i make you mad
ur name is satire but ur faking bad
ur not makin stackz. u never seen paper axcept in ur favorite class
so take a bath ur dirty fuck i got thirty trucks full of nuggas that will steal ur shirt and chucks
ur sandy vagina couldnt even hand me my rhyme book
this if the face of a guy shook to fight me
nighty night g
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Re: satire diss cuz hes a dumb nugga

Postby Master Chief » May 10th, '11, 05:38

Mahmoud doesn't use multies, not even ocassionaly :unsure:

What the fuck is going on here?
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Re: satire diss cuz hes a dumb nugga

Postby Maybe » May 10th, '11, 05:40

Master Chief wrote:Mahmoud doesn't use multies, not even ocassionaly :unsure:

What the fuck is going on here?


I already told Almostlity that this guy isn't Mahmoud. I checked the IP, of course, I don't know if he's using a proxy or not, but the server is too different. It can't be Mahmoud.
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Re: satire diss cuz hes a dumb nugga

Postby Aligator » May 10th, '11, 05:55

maybe u nuggaz will stop sayin im dat dude cuz im not. im raw and real
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Re: satire diss cuz hes a dumb nugga

Postby Drug.Ballad » May 10th, '11, 13:41

That was ok, untill you mentioned harry potter..not cool :shakehead:
and some of the words you use are just :facepalm
but some of the rhyming was good.
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