New Joint [Unfinished]

[Xray]

Pissed at the world cause I'm tryna know ya
But you're tryna block me like a Chinese soldier
You tried to come false like California
You're scared to come fourth like I'm tryna rob ya
You kept me warm when I was born I was sonnin'
But as life went on I felt gone all of a sudden
You gave me a sign, made me wise but wassup?
You gave me sight with both my eyes shut
You said I would die if I crossed the bridge
I said I would lie if I tossed no bitch
You said I was dope and I would just be the one
You made me realize why I shouldn't trust none
You showed me your plan, trespassed the gates
The Devil shook my hand and just passed away
You gave me your word and presented me a cannon
I fired your ball but I got sentenced, what happen?

It's like Shutter when I'm close to someone
Have I seen a ghost or is it cause I'm in the back, son?
My face smudged like it's bad papparazi
But I'ma make it you faggot pappa just watch me
Tryna make reason is like talking to myself
It makes me sick to indulge your help
Then you wonder why are we ever so damned
Cause there's nothing like another episode of man
I see the bigger picture and I just get nauseous
The way they're fucking hip hop is just hypnosis
I cuss em, that's the only way that I touch em
But fuck em, if they don't wanna keep a rapper custom
they wanna see my passion, they think I'm a pirate
they wanna see me laughin, they think I'ma write it
You'll need extra garlic to fuck with this Blade
Cause the world wants to frame me so fuck your display

Adding a hook and a third verse to this. This ^ is already recorded.

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[Maybe]

This was really good. The flow was excellent, because when I read it I imagined how you would spit it. It sounded pretty emotional, but I could be wrong. The lyrics were pretty spot, and the topic seemed content. I wasn't sure what it was about at all times, but regardless, it was dope.

[Xray]

Thanks for the comments. Yeah it's pretty emotional.

Track's coming soon.

[B.A.D.]

Oh crap, this sounds nice, and flows smooth like a mafucka... kinda different to your usual type of lyrics tho', this one seems very focused. damn, let me know when u release the audio.

btw man... I need a beat for a project Im doing wit someone. can u supply me some of your magic?

[Tash8]

like every one said the flow is perfect syllable wise, i think you will kill it with your delivery. I envision you screaming your full breath on your last line: "Cause the world wants to frame me so fuck your display"

good shit man