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Re: This Isn't Poetry - Full Song!

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » May 13th, '11, 17:40

i dont post in this section at all,but i had too,this was extremely dope.
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Re: This Isn't Poetry - Full Song!

Postby Maybe » May 14th, '11, 22:24

Devil'sAdvocate wrote:i dont post in this section at all,but i had too,this was extremely dope.


Appreciate you checking it out bro :y:
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Re: This Isn't Poetry - Full Song!

Postby mcZu » May 14th, '11, 22:29

Lol at the Tearing-teen-hoes (Tarantino)/snuff films punch, brilliant. Like everybody else already said, this is good.
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Re: This Isn't Poetry - Full Song!

Postby No Way Out » May 16th, '11, 01:42

Maybe's wilding out :y:
Maybe wrote:This is pretty damn good. For what it is, a simple, smooth flowing punch-line verse, it's perfect. You didn't miss a single rhyme, and the content was amusing. Good stuff man, really good.

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Re: This Isn't Poetry - Full Song!

Postby Ka0t1c » May 16th, '11, 22:50

cool piece, i think it has a good message :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: This Isn't Poetry - Full Song!

Postby nazchap » May 17th, '11, 07:22

Thanks for share with us..!!
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Re: This Isn't Poetry - Full Song!

Postby Maybe » May 17th, '11, 20:30

Thanks for checking it out people. :wub:
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