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high school drop out lyrics!

Postby No Way Out » Apr 2nd, '11, 09:15

Chorus : X1

Its Time To Wave Goodbye to my Future
Nothing-Left But-Regrets and to Fire My Tutor
With my Wrist cut Around the Size of a Ruler,
Im on the Next Plane Out to the Island Of Losers



Verse 1:
Only Time-Will-Tell-If These Hypothetic Winters
is the reason high school kinda left me 'Shivered'
Answered all my questions with Psychedelic Pictures
My Planes Crashing Near These Island Dwelling Figures
They said my name was Forrest And To Always Dot The I's,
Cuz i Aint-Smart i used to 'Trade-Marks' Like a Copyright (?)
"Psst, No Way's taking agriculture... Pass it along"
But I got expelled the first day for PLANTING a Bomb!
Every Lunch I'd have to Serve Kids Soup With a Knife
Cause i was in the back, bending Spoons with my mind
More-Cigs Before-Gym? Well I Aint Stoppin at One
So every Phys Ed I'd Play Dead While i Coughed Up My Lungs *Choking*
They said taking things literal was a Dumb Decision
Cause I started every Drama Class by trying to Dump My Bitches
When I Got Kicked Out For Life Cause i wasn't an American
i flew a plane into the school and Blamed it on a terrorist

Chorus X1
Maybe wrote:This is pretty damn good. For what it is, a simple, smooth flowing punch-line verse, it's perfect. You didn't miss a single rhyme, and the content was amusing. Good stuff man, really good.

10/10

C.R.E.A.M wrote:I thought that dude is all about trash talk and he's gonna leave the tourney in the first round.. but that was actually dangerous. :sweating:

Battle Record : 1-0
NWO, for short...

WARNING: This Cute Puppy's Got a Mean Bite ... Im Gonnna Have To Put a Sign on My Sig Or Something.
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Re: high school drop out lyrics!

Postby No Way Out » May 13th, '11, 06:49

drop some feeeed guys
Maybe wrote:This is pretty damn good. For what it is, a simple, smooth flowing punch-line verse, it's perfect. You didn't miss a single rhyme, and the content was amusing. Good stuff man, really good.

10/10

C.R.E.A.M wrote:I thought that dude is all about trash talk and he's gonna leave the tourney in the first round.. but that was actually dangerous. :sweating:

Battle Record : 1-0
NWO, for short...

WARNING: This Cute Puppy's Got a Mean Bite ... Im Gonnna Have To Put a Sign on My Sig Or Something.
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Re: high school drop out lyrics!

Postby mceddie » May 16th, '11, 12:31

really good man, dont know why you havent gotten any feed. you've got skills man.
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Re: high school drop out lyrics!

Postby Maybe » May 16th, '11, 16:12

This is pretty damn good. For what it is, a simple, smooth flowing punch-line verse, it's perfect. You didn't miss a single rhyme, and the content was amusing. Good stuff man, really good.

10/10
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Re: high school drop out lyrics!

Postby No Way Out » May 17th, '11, 02:11

Thanks for the gentlemanly responses :y:
Maybe wrote:This is pretty damn good. For what it is, a simple, smooth flowing punch-line verse, it's perfect. You didn't miss a single rhyme, and the content was amusing. Good stuff man, really good.

10/10

C.R.E.A.M wrote:I thought that dude is all about trash talk and he's gonna leave the tourney in the first round.. but that was actually dangerous. :sweating:

Battle Record : 1-0
NWO, for short...

WARNING: This Cute Puppy's Got a Mean Bite ... Im Gonnna Have To Put a Sign on My Sig Or Something.
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Re: high school drop out lyrics!

Postby Yah-hah » May 17th, '11, 09:28

Your definitly finding a good way to mix your style to a normal song. Good shit old homie
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Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: high school drop out lyrics!

Postby Drug.Ballad » May 17th, '11, 23:01

Damn that was good, wonder what that verse in the rap battle tourney will be like against me :sweating:
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Re: high school drop out lyrics!

Postby Spyder » May 18th, '11, 06:27

nice shit son, interested in the tourney alot more now :smoking:
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Re: high school drop out lyrics!

Postby There Will Be Blood » May 19th, '11, 19:15

That last line was nice. Fuck, the whole thing seems flawless to me.
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