TWBB's Rhyme book

[There Will Be Blood]

Never wrote anything before so Im going to start this thread and just post here instead of having a notebook. Kepp it all in one place. We'll see what happens.


I've come to spit this for the drama without hesitation like a letter with no coma's
I roll like Obama while you get capped like osama
Im Biggie, your just icky and a screw up
cause when you got introduced to the game you fuckin threw up
I'll have your girl screaming and gettin wet like my dick was a jet ski
In the bed Im Wayne Gretzky, Callin her coach and tellin her let me shoot the net B
My rhyme book is gonna cause MC's to step up their shit
Now favorite this thread if you wanna learn how to rip
it is what it is, so feedback this dick like i just insulted your kid


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EDIT: I should have made the 2nd line like "I make it pop like obama while you get dropped like Osama"

[Tash8]

haha cool man, funny lines. I agree with the little change you edited. Kinda short, so keep posting more.

[There Will Be Blood]

haha cool man, funny lines. I agree with the little change you edited. Kinda short, so keep posting more.

good looks.

[There Will Be Blood]

Dont look at me like a conspiracy and act like you aint hearin me
CW forum needs to start fearing the facts of cash and tyranny
Your dumb if you think There will be blood over a crumb
I'm talking to the one who's done fighting for just some
Gangsters with no guns now we trade stocks just for fun
Fuck young money and Jay Z too til its kingdom come
No heart left in the game but what you expect when power is all about fame
whether your tame and a lame you got twitter broadcasting your name
And this isn't a plead for equality like I'm free with no honor see-
-its more then pro-test and puffing your chest
The wolf is in the mirror next time your lookin for a test
What else you gonna do cause your not worth spit
The reality infallibly is all about grit
Forget chasing the green like shots to the spleen
Make History like dreams until the Earth kills us all and goes green
Thats conscious rap with flows hot enough to start melting the caps
Fucking dust in the wind if your not Big as Continents on maps
I continue the beef like Bush and Obama, with a-bomb-a-lama still bringing the drama
your ass singing raps because you just gotta is as scary as a baby with mama
Like a smoke in a Sauna I'll keep making you sweat with these joints
Ears bleed from my noise, Mc's on knees like boys wanting toys
Its me on point no need to rejoice
I'm making a ploy like Shady and Royce with them 2.0 boys
Bad meets Evil on roids- know you want my Vocab with voice
because I just leveled this game playin my second coin

(meaning my second post in this bitch)

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[There Will Be Blood]

appreciate some feed

[There Will Be Blood]

I'm sorry bro, I just finished reading the first verse and honestly i'm too lazy to read the second one .. so i'll feedback the first now and comeback for the second later
You can consider it as a planned bump.


Anyways, this was pretty impressive, I don't get it how new members that "never wrote anything before" have such a good sense of rhyming and witty humor, Your rhyming looked like a Jay-Z influenced piece, And you had some dope and funny lines, That Biggie line made me laugh , and the last line while might be similar with "some" other lines but you made it look good with some creativity, Damn son if you started like that, if you kept on writing you're gonna be a great writer in the future

I'll only recommend you to work on structuring on the first verse, second verse looks more carefully structured but since i didn't read it i won't judge.


I'll stop by for the second verse later, keep it up

Cool. I guess the writing thing is something that I was to pussy to fire off on til now. Anyways I gotta study the thread on structure and other pointers. Basically though I'm trying to put whatever I think down without to much...thought on the details, ya know? So you nailed the Jay Z thing.

Good looks on the motivation, I haven't skimmed to much of CW but I'll check your shit too. Also looking to get battling. Who could I take?