i really feel your writing style, you got many interwoven rhyme schemes--you don't see that often. Rhymes are very creative for the most part and cool punchlines.. none really stood out to me though besides this one:
My flow gets tighter than the goal of a pedofile,
cool, maybe a lil cliche but i dont think so cause you kinda flipped originally.
anyways good shit man, always like reading your stuff. would appreciate your feed on the end pt 2