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Better Perspective
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Better Perspective
by MikeNUFC » May 18th, '11, 21:14
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Re: Better Perspective
by Innovation » May 18th, '11, 21:30
Pretty good, Mike.
I noticed that you opted for a slightly different scheme than that of your previous work. The rhyming was still solid. Enjoyed reading it, mate.
I noticed that you opted for a slightly different scheme than that of your previous work. The rhyming was still solid. Enjoyed reading it, mate.
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Re: Better Perspective
by Verses » May 18th, '11, 21:33
I liked it, mainly cause the song actually gave me some insight into certain things...You don't record, do you?
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Re: Better Perspective
by MikeNUFC » May 18th, '11, 21:34
Cheers for the comments guys
And nah, I don't right now. Although I'm thinking about getting a mic over the summer.
And nah, I don't right now. Although I'm thinking about getting a mic over the summer.
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Re: Better Perspective
by Xray » May 23rd, '11, 06:51
This is good shit. Your best verse I've read recently. First 8 lines were your best. Concept was there and so was it's content. I like the way you ended it, fits the title perfectly. Mind checking my shit?
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Over a billion Muslims, you could never stop Islam
Over a billion bullets shooting from the chopper's arm
Carry a motherfucker head that I shred in Nam
I speak literally, figuratively, the prophet gone
New Track: The Nightmare
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Re: Better Perspective
by MikeNUFC » May 23rd, '11, 20:29
Xray wrote:This is good shit. Your best verse I've read recently. First 8 lines were your best. Concept was there and so was it's content. I like the way you ended it, fits the title perfectly. Mind checking my shit?
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=114390
Cheers man.
And done
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Re: Better Perspective
by ArsheyHaq » May 28th, '11, 21:17
I didn't really care for the subject matter, but it was deep nonetheless. I love your rhyming though. It's so clean, it feels just about perfect haha
"Of course, not a fan, just a interested onlooker
No roar from the stands, just a mess of a picture
Cus I bet that I differ from the usual non-ghetto kid
I don't just look on the surface, know it's wrong to dismiss"
It got a little weird there, cuz I think I pronounce words a little differently than you do. I can still see how it would rhyme though. Anyway, I love reading your stuff. Keep 'em coming!
"Of course, not a fan, just a interested onlooker
No roar from the stands, just a mess of a picture
Cus I bet that I differ from the usual non-ghetto kid
I don't just look on the surface, know it's wrong to dismiss"
It got a little weird there, cuz I think I pronounce words a little differently than you do. I can still see how it would rhyme though. Anyway, I love reading your stuff. Keep 'em coming!
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