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Re: Homophobic

Postby Sekou » May 17th, '11, 15:40

Wow. You really HATE gay people. A trauma or sth?
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Re: Homophobic

Postby K Reidy » May 17th, '11, 16:49

You my friend... You are an extremely ignorant person. And people like you disgrace the human race
"I don't have haters only fans in denial"-SwizZz
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Re: Homophobic

Postby MikeNUFC » May 17th, '11, 20:26

I didn't need proof that you're a total idiot but thanks.
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Re: Homophobic

Postby MikeNUFC » May 17th, '11, 20:48

You wrote a whole verse dissing gay people, full of ignorant generalisations.

That's as idiotic as writing a whole verse dissing black people.
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Re: Fagophobic

Postby Blu » May 18th, '11, 07:37

I agree with you, CREAM.
I hate seeing these "guys" dressing like fucking girls.
What happened to men being the strong ones? Hmm?
He's just expressing his opinion on people that dress like ladies, no need to diss him.
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Re: Fagophobic

Postby 12characters » May 18th, '11, 08:17

I don't know. I think dudes who dress up as girls are annoying.. but then again, everyone bothers me.

But I think there's worse people out there than "Fags".

As for the piece, it actually rhymes pretty well and I respect your decision to voice your opinion, but I don't agree with actual violence against people just for being different.
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Re: Fagophobic

Postby K Reidy » May 19th, '11, 18:03

Shouldn't the creative writing have creative writing? not some lame rip off of eminems bashing of gays

Why can't people be different? I mean you even had to change the title of this to try make it seem less as bad. Your pathetic and embarrassing
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Re: Fagophobic

Postby Wallace » May 21st, '11, 02:30

Piece is well written, flow sucked though.

About the theme, I won't make judgements.
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Re: Homophobic

Postby Maybe » May 24th, '11, 15:32

Amadeo wrote:
C.R.E.A.M wrote:And how many people in history dissed faggots ? probably millions

So C.R.E.A.M. will do this as a fucking hobby 'till then...


This made me lol.
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Re: Fagophobic

Postby Maybe » May 24th, '11, 15:37

Lol, I was so absorbed in the joke I forgot to comment about the verse... Honestly, I found it to be a good read. It was funny, which you just don't see anymore, and at the same time was written pretty coherently, and flowed pretty well.
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If you and Siinide don't start recording soon I'm going to fly to where ever you live, tie you up, put the mic in front of your faces and force you to record.
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Re: Fagophobic

Postby Maybe » May 24th, '11, 15:57

C.R.E.A.M wrote:Haha, that might be the best feedback in this long-ass two paged thread ! :p
Yeah, it's not pretty logically connected and looked a bit stereotypical, I was pretty against them the time I wrote this and I exaggerated in every line

Thanks for the feedback, bro! :b:


Meant to write "was" not "wasn't". Either way, not everything you write has to be logical, ya feel?
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If you and Siinide don't start recording soon I'm going to fly to where ever you live, tie you up, put the mic in front of your faces and force you to record.
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EG. wrote:and i dont even like hot dog
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Re: Fagophobic

Postby M&M59 » May 24th, '11, 16:18

damn this shit goes hard. :worship:

well writen, it flows so good and it dosen't seem like you are forcing any rhymes.. :y:

i wish i could make a rap like that. I Wanna be just like you
And when I go to hell and I'm gettin ready to leave
I'ma put air in a bag and charge people to breathe
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Re: Fagophobic

Postby BigBoss » May 25th, '11, 00:35

Totally agree with you brother :b:

Get the gays off this earth
RIP IN PEACE VIGILANCE
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Re: Fagophobic

Postby Drug.Ballad » May 25th, '11, 15:44

That was really good, your writting peices keep getting better :y:
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