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Huge Collab 2011

Postby Spyder » Jun 3rd, '11, 04:50

Spyder
Nostradomus, common prophet with an explosive voltage shockin
Rappers who want there seven minutes of heaven, come out the closet!
You had and lost it, get it in with the streets, spit with disease crazy real
What I’m sayin is ill go to war with any fish in the seas, Navy Seal.
Weak shots not power of rifles y’all cower but scour and spiteful
Don’t measure up, I’m like France my towers an eye-full(Eiffel)
Try to kiss frogs to get royalties, that shit I thought was a joke
Then tell me why these bitches end up with a frog in their throat…

C.R.E.A.M
Guess who's back with the TR Nation
We rape chicks, "knock you up" without "invitations"
I'm walking with an AIDS sprayed blade wrecking smiles
Coming to invade, raid and rape your women, PILES
I'm menacing to the point where i'll work as an engineer
Invent a door sill that'll flip your entrance, name it "the big premiere"
We're on top of this bitch like a cash-equipped business, man!
So hop out of this shit before your carrer gets wrecked 'N 'Rap(ped)

McZu
An outlaw with the tragedy, I Gaddafi tracks
Go off on wax, they better arrest me for murder like I’m Cassidy
Their whole anatomies are fake when they comment
Fox news couldn’t paint them violent, they’re way too Common
I'm a one man army, my brain Genghis Khan
A Moroccan with a cannon, but I’m not Mariah Carey’s son
Just carry on, yes you’re sick, like you caught that
I just murdered you, now your homies can go and cover Tupac Back

Fa-Q
I’m a clone of a cyclone, sideways, going so many ways,
That my middle fingers look like penises on skinny gays,
Is that homophobic, naw its means I’m in slo-mo aerobics,
I show no, love for slow kids, my sympathy, is a symphony,
Empathy? I introduce all the orphan children, to foreign killin’
I start cult classics, bolt past it, jumpin through four-inch ceilin’s
I’m a saint Bernard, thats an asshole, I’m a pain in the ass,
A saint that aint stopping, until I’m at least a stain in the glass,

BILI
Hip-hop’s not dead, its just raped and tortured
By these lame fucks, how can we trust apes and moochers?
They know they’ll ruin it, but these sissies dont stop
But we, we cant fuck up, well, unless your sis is on top
Fake gangsters that never killed anything but boredom
Game full of bitches like a whoredom, but more dumb
It screams for our help, we cant leave it like this
I’m just warming up, but believe it I’m pissed

Gutawafang
Look, I've never listed whatever might be involved
It's a bullet through your head that this psychic will solve
This case, so rest in fucking peace, quit living
Rest the fucking case too, fuck your shit beefing
Don't even try anything, I say shit that I wanna
And this ain't even half of my fuck-this-shit-persona
Call this swaggerjack, we the 2 girls, you're the cup
Serve it raw from my fishy ass, bitch, order up

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Re: Huge Collab 2011

Postby BILI » Jun 3rd, '11, 20:03

You guys did great :worship:
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Re: Huge Collab 2011

Postby classthe_king » Jun 3rd, '11, 22:18

oh shit I forgot about this lmao
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Re: Huge Collab 2011

Postby Sam. » Jun 4th, '11, 14:15

yeah yeah good work
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Re: Huge Collab 2011

Postby Spyder » Jun 6th, '11, 03:25

would love some more in depth feed lol
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Re: Huge Collab 2011

Postby Sam. » Jun 7th, '11, 15:15

Spyder wrote:would love some more in depth feed lol

:laughing: i will wait
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Re: Huge Collab 2011

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 7th, '11, 16:37

Glad I did this, and I'm glad I'm getting back to writing again....my pieces were very lackluster for awhile
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Re: Huge Collab 2011

Postby BILI » Jun 7th, '11, 16:39

Spyder wrote:would love some more in depth feed lol

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Re: Huge Collab 2011

Postby Yah-hah » Jun 10th, '11, 21:03

Damn me and class both forgot :'(
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Huge Collab 2011

Postby VenomBlackViper » Jun 11th, '11, 08:32

In order from most to least favorite. If you want me to review yours personally in depth just ask. Also had no idea this was going on or I would have dropped a verse.

1. Spyder

2. FaQ

3. BILI

4. McZu

5. CREAM

6. Gutawafang
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Re: Huge Collab 2011

Postby Spyder » Jun 11th, '11, 15:48

thanks for the love vbv

and i woulda asked ya but didnt know really bout ya til this tourney :y:
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