Revolutionary Minded

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That was pretty dope dude
It flowed rather well and you can tell that you meant what you were writing.

This was one of my favorite lines.

Give no fucks, blow up trucks, eradicate hearts, watch me go nuts

I like this line a lot too

I take a walk down the streets of West Bank
I see them tears falling for every citizen that's been hijacked

I found that I had to stress the word "hijacked" a bit, which really isn't a bad thing, though.

Overall, I thought it was dope and I'd definitely be interested in you recording something.

[Sam.]

Very neat shit . 3.5/5 type of shit . <--- see i shit twice

okay good of words there man nice ,impact full and simple .
it flowed perfectly ,that was the major plus point of your drop and lol i liked the whole piece man.
No flaws .

[Sam.]

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Very neat shit . 3.5/5 type of shit . <--- see i shit twice

okay good of words there man nice ,impact full and simple .
it flowed perfectly ,that was the major plus point of your drop and lol i liked the whole piece man.
No flaws .

Thanks
You should try to write something someday....

i have already

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