Just Rhymin'

[ChristinaE12]

For the fuck of it.. And because I'm in, I guess, a writers block.. This is nothing really to take seriously.. Just tryin' to get the creative 'juices' flowing. So, I was also playing around with different rhyme schemes and what not.. Just fuckin' around basically. I rushed some parts quite a bit but whatever..

Feed welcome, especially constructive criticism. Yeah, thanks.

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Cant think, I'm drowning in a fuckin writers block.
Brains clouding and shuttin down like I'm stuck in fighters lock.
Words sucked in tighter knots. Lost in my own web like a spider caught.
A lighter flooding in it's own fluid. (no flame) My thoughts are wounded.
I'm so distraught and putrid, my ideas I've fought and feuded.
No spark whatsoever, and every feeling I've sought and puked it..
Out. But from this point on I must blow it cleverly..
(and trust no one ever, See...)
That's been my Motto === D-T-A -4- L-I-F-E.
And I'll abide by that til the day that I die or OD.
Or somehow everybody, abruptly, grows trustworthy.
But in this industry there are just too many hoes bloodthirsty.
With no dignity, who'll always face you and pose brotherly.
But once your back is turned all bets instantly stacked so smotherly...
(Against you) And aint shit you can utterly do or fetch to catch your breath
(No signs) You'll be scratched and effaced after I etch a sketch your death.

[ChristinaE12]

Thanks Geno..

And yeah that was my first battle ever.. Very clueless on how to write those really. They actually seem harder to me to write but that is probably just cause of the inexperience.

Also, I've actually written other pieces on here.. Which I think the last couple are better than this piece. (I think) And I recently thought of this weird/funny concept recently that I'm gonna try and start really soon. Should be up here soon. Hopefully it works like I think it should.

LOL.. I checked your piece where you rhymed writers block/fighter talk. Kinda weird but I've seen that happen quite a bit on here and it's usually like the strangest shit.


Thanks, it's much appreciated.

[ChristinaE12]

Sweet, I'll be sure to check your stuff out more often.

And me and Menzo are actually in a bit of a zone right now, working on concepts and collabing with other people who wanna write to a good beat. If you wanna get on something let us know.

Yeah.. I've read your guys' pieces.. Some good shit. I really haven't said anything in the threads cause everyone beats me too it. You guys are definitely great writers. Can't wait to see what you come up with cause it's fun reading them for sure.

Before I collab though I gotta get more into it. I'm just starting/trying to get more into it again. I can sit for an hour and not come up with shit and then write for half that and come up with a whole 16 (like this happened). See how my next piece goes and go from there though..

[ChristinaE12]

If it makes you feel better, those three pieces I dropped with Geno were my first three ever submitted here...actually, I lied, back when I joined I dropped a freestyle which was..bad lol

But anyways, for someone with writer's block, this was really good I loved the writer's block/fighters lock/tighter knots/spider caught rhyme scheme

Yeah.. If ya keep at it you can be one of the best writers on here I'm sure. You definitely have skill.

Everything I've ever written has actually been posted here.. Like a total of 6 or 7 pieces I think. I'm still a newbie for sure. Haha.


Thanks guys.

[The Jazzman]

Nahhhh... I've seen tons better.