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lyrical legends 2 ft Yah-hah

Postby Spyder » Jun 6th, '11, 02:05

Spyder
My practice involves savage attacks over every atlas and map
So tactical in fact, your practically need magic to grasp,
Ill burn the earth to an inferno, turn to hell when I breathe
Devil in sheath, with war axe on a skeleton steed.
Malevolent beast, pick you up and slam you down again
Black as tar pits draped with carcass of a thousand men.
Vicious lyrics I say almost a myth im a cynical saint
Spit radiation aimed at nations til their skin rips away,
Scathe imitations of the greatest to say it,
Ill go through every emcee til your playlist is vacant.
Get in the ring bang and bust as I sting stab and thrust
Back with Yah, and to battle us is cadaverous.
Im starvin chasin your ass, I wont say it again
Carve my name in his back, no more makin amends
Barge your way out the shack as I gaze with a grin
Chart his place on the map, go wait where he lives.
heart just pace as I laugh at the things I just did,
starts takin a nap, as I work my way in the crib.
Dark cape and a mask, awakes to my fists
Scar his face into scraps when I aim at his chin,
Parts disarrayed on the mat, if you play I will win,
Bars imitate all that, didn’t I say I was sick?

Yah
You beatin me ill start laughin hard spit such rapid bars,
Your brain overheats and explodes with each synaptic charge,
Rippin my own flesh, my whole chest till im cracked to shards,
Open till you can see the acid marks on my dragon heart,
Corroded lungs from smokin blunts, flamethrower the blackest parts,
Tomahawks start crackin hearts hit ya squad with arachnid darts,
Crashin cars into acid holes while battle scars drawn at the throat,
With Jesus blood as war paint, cross is now a catapult,
Shoot nukes from my bow till the thrones levelled in a cold metal headress,
Even my girl snipes cowards from high towers with a rose petal red dress,
Purging horizons into blackness, sky a mile high with arrows,
Huge rations of voodoo magic reviving all the scarecrows,
This road is col and narrow with 300 goons at Thermopylae,
Slingshot dead bodies at the moon as an offering,
Now who's the fool you thought it was a great hoax in the first place,
Witch doctors dancing to conjure up tornadoes and earthquakes,
Fed up with yall fakers ill use my Red Chucks as jawbreakers,
The led burst in small layers till red dust dissolves later,
No Nike shocks or cross trainers just lightning shocks and law breakers,
High speef shots with strong lasers till I scream stop eons later


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Postby Spyder » Jun 7th, '11, 16:33

i feel like an ethiopian child, everyones gettin fed but me
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Postby Spyder » Jun 7th, '11, 17:14

:laughing: well as u know i aint in vet section so i couldnt of stole it ;)

thanks for the feed bro, yea was basically a continuation of me and yahs first piece
which was about nothin so this was the same haha
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Re: lyrical legends 2 ft Yah-hah

Postby Yah-hah » Jun 10th, '11, 20:58

Lmao I basically tried to write like a medival magician with multis lmao
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: lyrical legends 2 ft Yah-hah

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 11th, '11, 08:12

damn....but were very easy to flow to all the way through..perfect vocab (without sounding cocky or forced both places) and it seems, without sounding like you have a schoolgirl crush for a fan here, that you guys had a couple of perfect verses here. Honestly....I couldnt NOT flow on this, on both verses. Just by reading it you picked it up....great jobs guys :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: lyrical legends 2 ft Yah-hah

Postby Spyder » Jun 11th, '11, 15:51

thanks bro :worship:

yah you came correct son
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Re: lyrical legends 2 ft Yah-hah

Postby Yah-hah » Jun 12th, '11, 00:31

Ha sorry it took awhile lol real life ya kno
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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