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Huge Collab 2011 (Late Entry)

Postby WinstonMARX » Jun 10th, '11, 22:12

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There's a thin line between sick rhymes and sayin nothin bro
I herd; you go over the edge like wild buffalo
Why you bussin fo'? Steppin to me you must be God, dumb
or off the rocker, like Courtney Love with a shot gun
I'm smart, young, an steady throwin seven kinds of smoke
But when it comes to swag, I be trippin like kaleidoscopes
Yeah my style's dope, to call it swag is stupid, quite strange
An I ain't talkin where your eyes stray when I say you guys gaze
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Re: Huge Collab 2011 (Late Entry)

Postby WinstonMARX » Jun 11th, '11, 08:44

So stop sleeping on me, I ain't a mattress
But you do more drama than a soap-opera actress
Don't even think about pulling out and opening fire
Gun-shots wound, but I remove bullets with pliers
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Re: Huge Collab 2011 (Late Entry)

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jun 11th, '11, 09:20

WinstonMARX wrote:So stop sleeping on me, I ain't a mattress
But you do more drama than a soap-opera actress
Don't even think about pulling out and opening fire
Gun-shots wound, but I remove bullets with pliers

http://lyrics.chambermusik.com/misc/ll_ ... premix.txt
nice verse
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Re: Huge Collab 2011 (Late Entry)

Postby WinstonMARX » Jun 11th, '11, 09:28

macdaddy019967 wrote:
WinstonMARX wrote:So stop sleeping on me, I ain't a mattress
But you do more drama than a soap-opera actress
Don't even think about pulling out and opening fire
Gun-shots wound, but I remove bullets with pliers

http://lyrics.chambermusik.com/misc/ll_ ... premix.txt
nice verse
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You caught me. I posted some of Bis's most well known lyrics not because the first line pertained to this thread (which I even bolded and made bigger to stress the point) but because I thought people would think it was my work and praise me. Idk if I'm bein trolled or you're still mad you got exposed for biting shitty netcee verses.

EDIT: And you're a virgin.
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Re: Huge Collab 2011 (Late Entry)

Postby macdaddy019967 » Jun 11th, '11, 09:35

your punchlines are weak as hell 2
learn how to write before you embarrass yourself with this weak shit

An I ain't talkin where your eyes stray when I say you guys gaze

and this line^ is just pathetic
how long did you spend on this 5 min?

side note: re-write your shitty verse or meet me backstage for a proper ether
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Re: Huge Collab 2011 (Late Entry)

Postby WinstonMARX » Jun 11th, '11, 10:26

macdaddy019967 wrote:your punchlines are weak as hell 2
learn how to write before you embarrass yourself with this weak shit

An I ain't talkin where your eyes stray when I say you guys gaze

and this line^ is just pathetic
how long did you spend on this 5 min?

side note: re-write your shitty verse or meet me backstage for a proper ether


I spent less than five minutes on it. Bitch my set ups are doper than you're (nonexistant tbh) punchlines. I'm begging you to diss me just so I can crush your ass.

@CREAM thanks man
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Re: Huge Collab 2011 (Late Entry)

Postby BILI » Jun 11th, '11, 12:31

haha@ virgin
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