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What Should I Rap About? (Verse)

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What Should I Rap About? (Verse)

Postby MikeNUFC » Jun 12th, '11, 23:26

More quick writing, about half an hour this one. Any feed is welcome

I could make a cute song about love and that bollocks
I could spit a shitty verse about stuffing my wallet
I could write a big rap about the problems in Iraq
Could recite a quick track, saying I copped the biggest gat
I could rhyme a load flows about murdering your family
Or think of vague metaphors about searching for humanity
I might take a deep breath and spit wordage really rapidly
Make a video for it, just me cursing at the camera team
A verse about my rapping dream:"Working on my talent, B!"
Or just bravado - "Got the nerve to come and battle me?
What about horrorcore, how my words are pure insanity?
Some nostalgic shit, "I was nurtured in the clashing scene"
Maybe try grime, how I was "bursting in and stabbing teens"
Could do emo shit, "Really hurts to see her vanish, see"
So many options to choose, or I could just write like this
A verse about what to write, now THAT is my shit

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Re: What Should I Rap About? (Verse)

Postby MikeNUFC » Jun 12th, '11, 23:33

Cheers :b:

And yeah, that's just the start of the next rhyme scheme ("problems in Iraq/copped the biggest gat") following from the first couplet.
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Re: What Should I Rap About? (Verse)

Postby classthe_king » Jun 13th, '11, 01:44

Well this is basically flawless in my eyes. A creative concept, a great flow (from what I could tell) and great rhymes as usual. Your verses are consistantly solid, all you need now is a mic ;)
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: What Should I Rap About? (Verse)

Postby MikeNUFC » Jun 13th, '11, 18:00

^Thanks fellas.

I need a mic? I am Mike.
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Re: What Should I Rap About? (Verse)

Postby MikeNUFC » Jun 14th, '11, 15:50

Menzo wrote:All you need is one mic.


Nah he likes Giggs.
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Re: What Should I Rap About? (Verse)

Postby BILI » Jun 14th, '11, 15:57

I love it man...its very original,rhymes are on point,you wrote it to a beat? Anyways its structured well and it I can flow it... A+ :y:
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