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Postby WakeUpShow » Jun 17th, '11, 05:52

took it down
Last edited by WakeUpShow on Jun 22nd, '11, 16:39, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Wordplay

Postby Master Chief » Jun 17th, '11, 06:02

u suck.
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Re: Wordplay

Postby WakeUpShow » Jun 17th, '11, 06:12

Master Chief wrote:u suck.

k bye.
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Re: Wordplay

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 17th, '11, 08:39

Master Chief wrote:u suck.

u r a coksuka
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Re: Wordplay

Postby WakeUpShow » Jun 18th, '11, 17:12

bump.....
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Re: Wordplay

Postby ArsheyHaq » Jun 21st, '11, 23:14

What's with the hate? Damn..

Anyway, this was dope, just like pretty much everything I read from you. Great rhyming. The words you rhyme I don't think anyone else would come up with, which is super dope man. Your last line was mad crazy haha but like I said before, your pieces are really short. I like how you took my advice and made a "Best of" compilation, but I think next time you should wait a little longer till you have more dope rhymes and post a 16 or something. Hope that helps. :y:
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Re: Wordplay

Postby WakeUpShow » Jun 22nd, '11, 04:30

ArsheyHaq wrote:What's with the hate? Damn..

Anyway, this was dope, just like pretty much everything I read from you. Great rhyming. The words you rhyme I don't think anyone else would come up with, which is super dope man. Your last line was mad crazy haha but like I said before, your pieces are really short. I like how you took my advice and made a "Best of" compilation, but I think next time you should wait a little longer till you have more dope rhymes and post a 16 or something. Hope that helps. :y:

thanks man, did you get the 2nd line?
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