Geno, your piece flows
amazingly to the beat, shit was beyond orgasmic. Great use of multies too both in your verse & the hook. I liked your delivery too.
Favorite lines
Always been doing this on my own with no help,
And for days I've been ruined, not knowing myself,
I'm dazed and confused, slowly goin' to hell,
I'm insane that's a fact - only tame when I'm mad,
And I'm just a day away from blowin' my brain in my lap,
BILI, while Genos verse was better yours was still good, flowed well to the beat however your flow could be worked on more, the multies were a bit basic however they worked & I wouldn't say anything about them if I wasn't giving feedback. Also writing something as smh did confuse me a bit, I had to pause the song cuz it fucked me up.
Favorite lines
This bullshit is making me crazy, I`m kicking the walls
I`m bad now? But when I get famous you`ll be LICKING MY BALLS
But is that really my thing? Do I want to become a TV king?
Fuck NO, I hope you`ll never see me sing, only see me swing
Just to see me diss rich, I`m already getting tired of THIS BITCH!!!
WHERE CAN I TURN OFF THIS SWITCH?!
Both of you stuck to the concept of "fuck being famous" well even though I thought from the name this would be some funny, fucking with you type shit.
Great piece both of you.