Birth of evil

[Yah-hah]

I was a coat hanger abortion baby,
Kickin her tummy like shit quit ignorin me lady,
Now shes punchin her tummy I feel the pokes and laugh,
I turned that hanger into the halo I was supposed to have,
Made a c section from the inside,
Walked out spit on the docs face and told the bitch hi,
Mom is screamin the doc he keeps on coughin then,
I straight walk up out the
room in my beaded mocasins,
Yup they're the same ones your teeth get stomped in,
Old ladys screamin with no diaper im peein but they keep on watchin it,
Hes lost all of it, reaper keeps callin him,
Someone flipped the switch now the bleeper is off again,
Callin the swat teams on this devil in the flesh baby,
Crazy could this really be the devil in the flesh? maybe,
Catch me and cut my head off yet they're still beginnin to question,
Because my tops still spinnin like the end of inception

[Chet Starr]

Haha the inception line made me laugh. Dope stuff

[VenomBlackViper]

Great verse, this is the kinda shit I enjoy reading. The word evil drew me to read this tbh & it didn't disappoint. Only line I didn't like was rhyming devil in the flesh twice in a row, found that a bit lazy. Besides that dope piece.

[Yah-hah]

Great verse, this is the kinda shit I enjoy reading. The word evil drew me to read this tbh & it didn't disappoint. Only line I didn't like was rhyming devil in the flesh twice in a row, found that a bit lazy. Besides that dope piece.

Yeah I do that sometimes almost like a satirical kind of thing like say that last rhyme where I used devil in the maybe and say it in a normal voice. Thanks for the feed you guys

[Fa-Q]

You just gonna post this without me, broham

[Maybe]

What a weird verse... In the best way possible, of course. This is the unique stuff that makes Hip-Hop the best genre. Seriously man, awesome verse. Creative rhyming, lyricism, flow. What else can I say?

[Enimee]

hahahaha i loved every second of this verse, at first i was kinda like. "ok wtf is he talkin about" but the shit was pretty funny i dig the inception line

[ArsheyHaq]

The beginning was dope as hell and your finisher was executed very nicely as well. I wasn't diggin' some parts in the middle, but still you gots skill haha You should post more often, man.

[Mahmoud48]

so dope it made me wanna write something
u inspired me

[ilovebender.com]

I was a coat hanger abortion baby,
Kickin her tummy like shit quit ignorin me lady,
Now shes punchin her tummy I feel the pokes and laugh,
I turned that hanger into the halo I was supposed to have,
Made a c section from the inside,
Walked out spit on the docs face and told the bitch hi,
Mom is screamin the doc he keeps on coughin then,
I straight walk up out the
room in my beaded mocasins,
Yup they're the same ones your teeth get stomped in,
Old ladys screamin with no diaper im peein but they keep on watchin it,
Hes lost all of it, reaper keeps callin him,
Someone flipped the switch now the bleeper is off again,
Callin the swat teams on this devil in the flesh baby,
Crazy could this really be the devil in the flesh? maybe,
Catch me and cut my head off yet they're still beginnin to question,
Because my tops still spinnin like the end of inception

Is this slow or fast?

Nice attention to detail though.

[Block]

What the fuck did I just read? Haha. Idk what to say, haha. Everything is good, just weird.. Good to seeeeeee you writing again bro. I wanna hear you record still

[Yah-hah]

Lol ya its fast some parts slow in others thats kinda how I write. Ya I barely have any time to write but at you know 3am baby just went to sleep and no work tomorrow ill jot somethin down lol

[ilovebender.com]

The opener reminded me of Family Guy's 'Prom Night Dumpster Baby' song... Which made me wonder about the tempo/bpm of what I was reading.