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FreeSpeech - Syllable Symphony (Rhyme Asylum fans?)

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FreeSpeech - Syllable Symphony (Rhyme Asylum fans?)

Postby FreeSpeech » Jul 5th, '11, 03:03

Class' was nice, so I did the exact same syllable scheme. I'm pretty sure the only rhyming word I used the same as his was dinner, I challeneged myself not to. Made it real hard...

I honestly don't like this "look how sick i am" style of rap, but it's good multi practice. And my Stephen Hawking line was nice as hell if I do say so myself :smoking:

Off the richter, bar ripper with a heart gone bitter
Barking in ya park, stalking, 'bout to carve your figure
The hard hitter, gon' hit ya when I'm on the liquor
By dawn commit a bigger rap sheet than Saddam and this the-
Start of it all, light skinned, but I'm the darkest N igga
Coughing, spit in your coffin, and rob your misses
She's all sobs and this is my job, commissioned
By some sovereign fission, but far from what God envisioned
I maul litters of of you pussys, gut an artist thinner
Than an Olsen twin filled with laxatives and starved for dinner
The new Godzilla, flip your car and then scar Atilla
I'm far realer than you so-called hardened killers
I sparred with martyrs, lost some blood and used tar for filler
Got iller, Lost an ear and got fitted with a shark antenna
Now the second blood's spilled, I start hawking in, the-
Softest I've ever been? Shit, that moment's not remembered
You're speechless like Steven Hawking when I cut off his finger
When I enter the room, sure bet you start to tremor
Devil tried to cop my soul, like "yo, can I barter whicha?"
He offered the world, I told him fuck off or make the offer bigger
#TRYeezus
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Re: FreeSpeech - Syllable Symphony (Rhyme Asylum fans?)

Postby VenomBlackViper » Jul 5th, '11, 03:48

Liked the Stephen Hawking & darkest nikka lines a lot. Great multi scheme the entire way through besides ending one of your bars with "in the-" that bar splitting shit is annoying & always sticks out to me when someone does it.
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Re: FreeSpeech - Syllable Symphony (Rhyme Asylum fans?)

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 5th, '11, 04:04

Oh wow man, those are nice clever lines, some lines seemed useless in the content... didn't hurt you keep it up
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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