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Sentus- Syllable Symphony

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Re: Sentus- Syllable Symphony

Postby Master Chief » Jul 7th, '11, 03:01

I smile everytime you think I'm trolling when I say you're not a good rapper lol.
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Re: Sentus- Syllable Symphony

Postby classthe_king » Jul 7th, '11, 03:03

Yeah man, keep insulting me. I know it's been a long and hard day for you and you have a lot of shit to get off your chest, I'm here for you.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Sentus- Syllable Symphony

Postby RainMan44 » Jul 7th, '11, 03:25

The content is all over the place, but that's not a flaw, that's more of a decision. Other than that, it's very good. You really seem to have endless multis. Good shit bro :y:

Please feed my lonely "Nothin's Changed" piece? :(
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Re: Sentus- Syllable Symphony

Postby Devil'sAdvocate » Jul 7th, '11, 15:05

Pretentious.
The devil ain't on a level same as him!
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