Gene

[BigBoss]

so i wrote this just lettin off steam, i was thinkin of one of my few bestfriends that was shot and killed begginning of this year, and decided to get feed abck from it, tell me whaat yall think. gimme feedbackk



My homie Gene, taken from us on the first day of 2011/
I still can’t believe it, man was shot by a .357/
Don’t worry my friend, me and Kevin went in and shot at em with a mac 11/
I missed but hell is were Kevin sent em/
Anyway I remember you always talkin bout the afterlife man how’s heaven?

I miss you man and it’s hard to believe, you were the fuckin one who had to leave/
When I heard man all I could do was grieve, the team? Man we’ve- /
Dedicated everything to you, im sorry you never got to ahieve- /
Your goals man, and the mothafucka who got you? It took a reprieve/
But his dreams are sheathed, man I remember when we first joined the team/
In the first game We built up the steam waitin to be released/
my first time in I let out scream, tackled the QB but snapped my knee, he switched me out and you were nervous about getting in, I got you pumped up, built up your esteem/

You went in and for the rest of the quarter you got every sack/
at the end i think he was carried off with a broken back/
After that, fear is what you always lacked/
Man We worked out every day, from swimmin to hittin the track/
So many memories man we had the perfect match for a friendship
With me being white, you being black, your mother was happy cause of that/
Man You always had my back, when I got jumped you went on the attack/
When you threw him down the stairs and we all heard his skull crack/
The other 2 mothafuckas ran away like some pussy ass fags/
From then on out every bitch was to scared of us to scrap/
Man im tired of this, il see ya later man ima take a nap/

[BigBoss]

yea when i posted it here it was one big huge verse, but i decided to change it so it didnt look wierd...lol
and yea its all true story

mkay, im tryin to just get more multi's in my songs realy

[BigBoss]

I was gonna say you should try to fit more if you can, but I know what it's like writing about personal stuff. It gets hard to find the words. Take a look at Difficult by Em for example. You know? So I think simpler songs, especially about death and similar subjects, is alright.

haha yea i made another one, about killing this girl..one of the things i talk about is "sowing her pussy shut/ now nobody will give a fuck" hahahahahaha violent shit is way fuckin easier to rhyme

[BigBoss]

not yet, im not done with it haha

[Alex2012]

Very emotional for me, I also lost a best friend, so I can go inside easily, I have not really analyze the structure and rhyme, I had not really want, I preferred to take it as it came .

did you finished Lifes a Dream?

[BigBoss]

no i could never think of a good enough chorus for it

[Mahmoud48]

As genocide said it's structured weird so it's hard to read it

[BigBoss]

If you want me to, I can do a chorus and even a verse if you want so you post it.

do i smell a collab? haha if you want suure go ahead

[BigBoss]

As genocide said it's structured weird so it's hard to read it

read it as one big verse, i broke it apart cus i didnt want it that long but eh

[BigBoss]

If you want me to, I can do a chorus and even a verse if you want so you post it.

do i smell a collab? haha if you want suure go ahead

Yeah sure man haha. Got your verse down? Send me it and so I have an idea of what to do.

wait are you talkin about my "girl rape/murder" one?

[BigBoss]

ooooh you wanna do the chorus? if you want be my guest,


or we could just make a whole new song hahaahaha but its up to you