Menzo & Innovation Present: Lyrical Appreciation Thread

[Sam.]

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[Drug.Ballad]

Nice thread

We As Americans:

But this time, when I get pulled over
There's a Doberman Pinscher

You wanna harass with this limo-tinted glass
Flashin that flashlight on my ass, where was you at
Last night when them assholes, ran up on my grass?

[Innovation]

Nice thread

We As Americans:

But this time, when I get pulled over
There's a Doberman Pinscher

You wanna harass with this limo-tinted glass
Flashin that flashlight on my ass, where was you at
Last night when them assholes, ran up on my grass?

Nice finds. We'll have to wait for Menzo to see it so he can edit the thread.

[Devil'sAdvocate]

i didnt notice how much "Cold Wind Blows" is lyrical,hard hitting and extremely well written.

1 extra point for my recovery love.

[Innovation]

i didnt notice how much "Cold Wind Blows" is lyrical,hard hitting and extremely well written.

1 extra point for my recovery love.

I always knew it was dope but when I did the first verse I was like "damn, Eminem was on point here".

[Sam.]

one more request d00ds try "The Sauce" SHIT IS AWESOME .

[Innovation]

After skimming, here's what I noticed you missed:

Cold Wind Blows:

buddha light a bong/you to write a song

Also, "over there" goes with don't compare/grow a pair

Deja Vu:

You missed he doesn't hear/Three Musketeers

You missed helpin' you to get through/self-inducin' a snooze/Elvis do in your shoes

And "Proof so you use" goes with "you to get through" etc.

You also missed since I'm/insomn

You also missed you know the/pneumonia

Hello:

You missed equilibrium/be the lithium/people give me 'em

Seem to be one/mean any harm

Thanks Amadeo, much appreciated!

[Innovation]

Do you know if the track written in 2003? That's when it was released so it couldn't have been written too far before it.

[Amaranthine]

Do you guys think Em knows what inverse multis/assonance/consanance actually are, or do you think he just does it because it sounds awesome? Serious question. Because he never went to school by his own admission, he's said he's never read or studied poetry, and he's only ever read one book all the way through. Makes me think he just does it because it sounds cool and he wants to make as many things rhyme as possible, and not because he knows that they're actual rhyming techniques.

I didn't explain that very well, but hopefully you understand what I'm trying to say.

[Innovation]

I think some TES songs will have to be next!

[Innovation]

Do you guys think Em knows what inverse multis/assonance/consanance actually are, or do you think he just does it because it sounds awesome? Serious question. Because he never went to school by his own admission, he's said he's never read or studied poetry, and he's only ever read one book all the way through. Makes me think he just does it because it sounds cool and he wants to make as many things rhyme as possible, and not because he knows that they're actual rhyming techniques.

I didn't explain that very well, but hopefully you understand what I'm trying to say.

He did make a song called Syllables.

"And Im not just gonna sit back rhyming one syllable"

He means inverse multi-syllable rhyming. There's no doubt Eminem is aware that he is rhyming more than one syllable.

@Amrathine

I remember Eminem saying he was always good at English at school. He may not have been the smartest kid in his class, but he always took an interest in English. I'm not too sure whether the inverse multi's are purposely crafted, but I wouldn't be too surprised if they were. He's a genius with the language.

[Innovation]

I've got two request that I can think of
Drips and The Sauce

If you guys did these then .

I'll do Drips today.

[Sam.]

I've got two request that I can think of
Drips and The Sauce

If you guys did these then .

i req the sauce a long time ago butttttttttt

[Innovation]

The Kids will be posted up sometime tomorrow.

[Innovation]

The Kids

Credit to Amadeo for helping with a few more multi's before I posted.

Hi there little boys and girls (FUCK YOU!)
Today we're gonna to learn how to poison squirrels
But first, I'd like you to meet my friend Bob (Huh?)
Say hi Bob! ("Hi Bob") Bob's 30 and still lives with his mom
And he don't got a job, cause Bob sits at home and smokes pot
But his twelve-year old brother looks up to him an awful lot
And Bob likes to hang out at the local waffle spot
And wait in the parkin lot for waitresses off the clock
When it's late and the lot gets dark and fake like he walks his dog
Drag 'em in the woods and go straight to the chopping blocks (AHH!)
And even if they escaped and they got the cops
The ladies would all be so afraid, they would drop the charge
'til one night Mrs. Stacey went off the job
When she felt someone grab her whole face and said not to talk
But Stacey knew it was Bob and said knock it off
But Bob wouldn't knock it off cause he's crazy and off his rocker
Crazier than Slim Shady is off the vodka
You couldn't even take him to Dre's to get Bob a "Dr."
He grabbed Stace' by the legs as chopped it off her
And dropped her off in the lake for the cops to find her
But ever since the day Stacey went off to wander
They never found her, and Bob still hangs at the waffle diner
And that's the story of Bob and his marijuana
And what it might do to you
So see if the squirrels want any - it's bad for you

My penis is the size of a peanut, have you seen it?
FUCK NO you ain't seen it, it's the size of a peanut (Huh?)
Speakin of peanuts, you know what else is bad for squirrels?
Ecstasy is the worst drug in the world
If someone ever offers it to you, don't do it
Kids two hits'll probably drain all your spinal fluid
And spinal fluid is final, you won't get it back
So don't get attached, it'll attack every bone in your back
Meet Zach, twenty-one years old
After hangin out with some friends at a frat party, he gets bold
And decides to try five, when he's bribed by five guys
And peer pressure will win every time you try to fight it
Suddenly, he starts to convulse and his pulse goes into hyperdrive
And his eyes roll back in his skull {*blblblblblb*}
His back starts tah - look like the McDonald's Arches
He's on Donald's carpet, layin horizontal barfin {*BLEH*}
And everyone in the apartment starts laughin at him
"Hey Adam, Zach is a jackass, look at him!"
Cause they took it too, so they think it's funny
So they're laughing at basically nothing except maybe wasting his money
Meanwhile, Zach's in a coma, the action is over
And his back and his shoulders hunched up like he's practicin yoga
And that's the story of Zach, the ecstasy maniac
So don't even feed that to squirrels class, cause it's bad for you

And last but not least, one of the most humungous
Problems among young people today, is fungus
It grows from cow manure, they pick it out, wipe it off
Bag it up, and you put it right in your mouth and chew it
Yum yum! Then you start to see some dumb stuff
And everything slows down when you eat some of 'em
And sometimes you see things that aren't there (Like what?)
Like fat woman in G-strings with orange hair
(Mr. Shady what's a G-string?) It's yarn Claire
Women stick 'em up their behinds, go out and wear 'em (Huh?)
And if you swallow too much of the magic mushrooms
Whoops, did I say magic mushrooms? I meant fungus
Ya tongue gets, all swoll up like a cow's tongue (How come?)
Cause it comes from a cow's dung (Gross!!)
See drugs are bad, it's a common fact
But your mom and dad, know that's all that I'm good at (Oh!)
But don't be me, cause if you grow up and you go and O.D
They're gonna come for me and I'mma have to grow a goatee
And get a disguise and hide, cause it'll be my fault
So don't do drugs, and do exactly as I don't
Cause I'm bad for you