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Re: MCSam & PK - Bad Luck

Postby Chet Starr » Mar 2nd, '11, 11:54

Sam, you told a good detailed story, but I don't think it was as good as PK's.

The stark contrast of reading this


c'mon get clothed,jump out of this window,or imma tie you in this chain
cut you into pieces ,hide it in the freezer,yeah call me insane

followed by

I bump Lil B but theres no hoes on my dick
if their was they hopped off cause they know that I bit

The verses just don't fit at all, and seem like there was no effort to even makes this a collab. Your verse is on some graphic violence shit, and PK is trying about his life.

Both verses were good, I enjoyed PK's more. I think Sam's verse would be more enjoyable on a audio track, and I may like it more then. PK's just flowed easy as rain in my mind, so that's why it's my favorite of this.

Horrible collab, but good 2 verses....if that makes sense lol :unsure:

I wanna collab with people!!!
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Re: MCSam & PK - Bad Luck

Postby Sam. » Jun 8th, '11, 21:24

Chet Starr wrote:Sam, you told a good detailed story, but I don't think it was as good as PK's.

The stark contrast of reading this


c'mon get clothed,jump out of this window,or imma tie you in this chain
cut you into pieces ,hide it in the freezer,yeah call me insane

followed by

I bump Lil B but theres no hoes on my dick
if their was they hopped off cause they know that I bit

The verses just don't fit at all, and seem like there was no effort to even makes this a collab. Your verse is on some graphic violence shit, and PK is trying about his life.

Both verses were good, I enjoyed PK's more. I think Sam's verse would be more enjoyable on a audio track, and I may like it more then. PK's just flowed easy as rain in my mind, so that's why it's my favorite of this.

Horrible collab, but good 2 verses....if that makes sense lol :unsure:

I wanna collab with people!!!

just noticed this thanks man . :8)
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Re: MCSam & PK - Bad Luck

Postby Fa-Q » Jun 8th, '11, 21:44

Sam's first date with kim K :shifty: :shifty:
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Re: MCSam & PK - Bad Luck

Postby Sam. » Jun 8th, '11, 21:51

Fa-Q wrote:Sam's first date with kim K :shifty: :shifty:

wont put her in the freezer or the closet tho my bedroom is huge ,nahimean ?
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Re: MCSam & PK - Bad Luck

Postby J.R. » Jul 23rd, '11, 17:02

Pretty good, Lacked Multi's, Not the best collab around,

But. Great story and flow, and I really like it to be honest.
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Re: MCSam & PK - Bad Luck

Postby Sam. » Jul 23rd, '11, 19:09

:worship: thanks fellas
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