VBV & ArsheyHaq - Throwaway The Trash

[VenomBlackViper]

A collab with me & Arshey going bar for bar, try to keep up.
His bars all end in slash marks (these things: / ) mine have nothing at the end of them, so you can tell who's rapping.



I'm Arshey Haq, but you're just HACKS; like breach of data/
you freaks of nature reek of failure/
we'll rip you to shreds like sheets of paper/
ya'll so cliche'd, but we never cease to amaze ya/
givin' you somethin' to appreciate's a piece of cake, easy as A-B-C's, so meet your makers!!/

I'll beat ya legs first till ya shit your drawers & piss on your floor
You might be nice with the hands but I draw a quicker sword
Night of my wedding, out looking for a sicker whore to give my dick a sore
So greedy I'll win the lottery & still rob the liquor store
I don't erase the words of Christ, I cross through them
Undead, every album I release is posthumous
To find myself I had to journey to lost ruins
The same one where I toss humans, a vast herd of 'em

You talk a lotta trash, but we'll get the last word on ya/
we're cash burglars with Asperger's who are also mass murderers/
we'll leave your ass hurtin' in a body cast from a smashed vertebrae/
then evict you from your house while we sit and count hundreds/
toss you in the same ditch that your kids were found dumped in/
don't give a shit about nothin'/
there's only one me, but you're strictly outnumbered/
fuck, soon as you hit the sound button/
we get the ground thumpin', get this crowd jumpin,/
and get this town bumpin'---YOU? Make us sick to our stomachs!/
fell off and didn't hit the ground runnin'/
you'll never amount to somethin'/
you're a virus to this site! We about to fix this malfunction/

I pound punches full of loud cussin' that's even got hounds duckin'
Till the stands are filled with more fans that were killed than hazardous spills at cancer drills
With a butcher knife I turn McDonalds to Hamburger Hill
Mad when I get a burger, bitch I asked for a meal
Not lost for words, eating snatch is the only time cat's got my tongue
Inhaling meth but waiting till the crack rots my lungs
When it comes to coke, like fat kids in the lunchroom I put pounds in lines
Crunch shrooms & inhale dust fumes till i'm on mushroom cloud nine
You'll be rolling on the spiked floor dying from laughter at this untrue clowns line
Turned into a foul rhyme that you could never outshine, you're wack not even decent at all

Who told you kids you could SPEAK TO ADULTS?!/
we'll have your life screech to a halt; have you beat to a pulp/
'till we don't feel a beat to your pulse; a lethal assault/
then feed you to wolves while watching you being engulfed/
eaten & gulped *burp* down/

We're leaders of this cult, your soul is mine to keep
I snort lines of coke off of paper with lined sheets
Your bitch blows my mind the way she gives brains, shes a mindfreak
Sick in the head, my deep thoughts will give you AIDs in the brain
Whenever I take flight there's a snake on the plane
Don't got a heart, my chest is hollow inside
I'll make you choke on my words then bust creative juices & have you swallow my pride

And now that all of you died, we'll be leaving...But you go away FIRST/
Cuz you just got killed by our throwaway verse!/

Arshey Feedback: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=118266
VBV Feedback: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=119442

[Sam.]

dope piece obv high on multis but very poor in content donnt get me wrong tho i liked venoms verse but the lines were so random that i personally did not like it that much as compared to your previous works and the same applies to you ash .
good effort.

[VenomBlackViper]

Content? None of the shit i've posted here has ever been high on "content" i've only ever wrote 2 songs that could be considered emotional & both of them are unfinished, never been posted here & are meant to be audio pieces not writtens. Only difference here from my previous shit is that it wasn't as much of a horrorcore piece, although there are some areas where multis are being used to say something that isn't that impressive i'll admit that. Either way thanks for the feed.

[ArsheyHaq]

Content wasn't a focus of ours at all lol just spittin' back and forth, showcasing our skills. Just for fun Eh, like I said it was our throwaway verse thanks for your feed, man

[Mr Change]

Really enjoyed this had some really smart lines & rhyming in it forreal

Heres my favorite parts;



So greedy I'll win the lottery & still rob the liquor store
I don't erase the words of Christ, I cross through them
Undead, every album I release is posthumous
To find myself I had to journey to lost ruins
The same one where I toss humans, a vast herd of 'em


You talk a lotta trash, but we'll get the last word on ya/
we're cash burglars with Asperger's who are also mass murderers/
we'll leave your ass hurtin' in a body cast from a smashed vertebrae/
then evict you from your house while we sit and count hundreds/
toss you in the same ditch that your kids were found dumped in/


I pound punches full of loud cussin' that's even got hounds duckin'
Till the stands are filled with more fans that were killed than hazardous spills at cancer drills
With a butcher knife I turn McDonalds to Hamburger Hill
Mad when I get a burger, bitch I asked for a meal
Not lost for words, eating snatch is the only time cat's got my tongue
Inhaling meth but waiting till the crack rots my lungs

[ArsheyHaq]

Damn this is dope. Not much to say, you guys killed it and I liked it.

Hey Menzo..Looks like these guys are jackin' our style.

Lol what? I've honestly never seen your guys' collab. When's the last time you even posted..

[ArsheyHaq]

That's cool, we should all join forces for a collab some time soon

[Sam.]

Content? None of the shit i've posted here has ever been high on "content" i've only ever wrote 2 songs that could be considered emotional & both of them are unfinished, never been posted here & are meant to be audio pieces not writtens. Only difference here from my previous shit is that it wasn't as much of a horrorcore piece, although there are some areas where multis are being used to say something that isn't that impressive i'll admit that. Either way thanks for the feed.

let me say in some simple words well "content" unhhh consider you are telling a story that goes like
1
2
3
4
5
6

some thing like that okay ! one line leads to another but if you said some like this

1
2
3.g
4.r
5
6.x
g,r and x are some extra element you added to make it dope namely multis ,punches and wordplay etc

putting that to your case g.r and x were good but 1-6 were not good .

[Alex2012]

It was very good to read, as a dose of ecstasy after a long sleep.

Whenever I take flight There's a snake on the plane

I will certainly reflect on this line a part of the day.

[ArsheyHaq]

I'm craving more feedback. Feed me. FEED MEE!! Hehe

[VenomBlackViper]

It was very good to read, as a dose of ecstasy after a long sleep.

Whenever I take flight There's a snake on the plane

I will certainly reflect on this line a part of the day.

[Alex2012]

It was very good to read, as a dose of ecstasy after a long sleep.

Whenever I take flight There's a snake on the plane

I will certainly reflect on this line a part of the day.

[Sam.]

It was very good to read, as a dose of ecstasy after a long sleep.

Whenever I take flight There's a snake on the plane

I will certainly reflect on this line a part of the day.

high on the wee wee

[VenomBlackViper]

Thank you Sam, for providing in depth feedback rather than just making a joke about a smiley & leaving.

[Sam.]

Thank you Sam, for providing in depth feedback rather than just making a joke about a smiley & leaving.

i guess you mean this

Content? None of the shit i've posted here has ever been high on "content" i've only ever wrote 2 songs that could be considered emotional & both of them are unfinished, never been posted here & are meant to be audio pieces not writtens. Only difference here from my previous shit is that it wasn't as much of a horrorcore piece, although there are some areas where multis are being used to say something that isn't that impressive i'll admit that. Either way thanks for the feed.

let me say in some simple words well "content" unhhh consider you are telling a story that goes like
1
2
3
4
5
6

some thing like that okay ! one line leads to another but if you said some like this

1
2
3.g
4.r
5
6.x
g,r and x are some extra element you added to make it dope namely multis ,punches and wordplay etc

putting that to your case g.r and x were good but 1-6 were not good .

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