"Fucking A-round" Feat mdemaz.

[Sam.]

This shit in particular is a keystyle type of shit that we both made the other day just spamming here and there so hence the title .

I have already fed some pieces infact all of them that were dropped so there no need of a feed of link i think and also if you need a feed hit me up here i 'll spoon feed your shit .

mdemaz

I treat my life like a toy
play around with it like a little boy
getting to the point where everything annoys
me no joy or glee or story to tell thee
I'm pretty much sick in the head
people thinking I'm a dick for doing all genres of music
they can drop dead
the cops said demaz don't throw rocks at people's heads
not my fault they are yelling at me
hypocritical lyrical miracle spiritual shit I pull
out of my ass count my words fast
1 2 3 4
cunt you better pee more
golden shower holding this power
rocking on the guitar like metallica
each time I rap it feels like nothing else matters HA.

MCSam

with you in my mind all i think is sex,
condom on my dick ofcourse color pink is best,
not a inch for the wind to pass this close we get,
i am high up in you till your fuckin hoe gets wet,
rod's in motion ready to spill oil in your curvy gulf,
don't worry what the world gone say fuck we are adults,
taking snaps of both of us baby that ain't no thang,
you can hang it up on the wall or make it your face book update,
so let me caress those breast and untangle your hair ,
can tell by the pace of your breath that my orgasm is there ,
your mind fucked words got you laid like bricks,
fantasies go off the top by the way we think ,
she got my magic wand i like how she plays these tricks,
hollers my name louder shows how amazed she is,
put her to sleep and leave without making a sound,
easy as counting sheep ,matt i was just fucking a-round

[mdemaz]

@ my verse.

[Sam.]

:facepalm @ my verse.

was ayt .

[mdemaz]

I should change it to yelling AT me..Not ARE me lol....Wait a minute, Sam did you change that...?
'Cause I remember sending AT me..

[Sam.]

I should change it to yelling AT me..Not ARE me lol....Wait a minute, Sam did you change that...?
'Cause I remember sending AT me..

no i did not .

[mdemaz]

Oh my bad, I must of had a glitch in the Unicode thingy..
Wtf, I'm seeing shit...Oh wait, throwing rocks are people's heads is meant to be at people's heads..My bad..Could you change it? HAHA..

[ArsheyHaq]

Lmao mdemaz, you're verse made my day. Shit was hilarious. Idk if you want any serious feedback considering it looked like you were just clownin' the whole time.

[BumShiv]

@Sam the shyte was hilarious! both were great verses. I really like the Metallica line how long did it take you guys to type/write this?

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[mdemaz]

We just compiled a bunch of 4s we did in the cypher really, Sam did his own thing..

[Sam.]

Lmao mdemaz, you're verse made my day. Shit was hilarious. Idk if you want any serious feedback considering it looked like you were just clownin' the whole time.

it has my verses too and would like a detailed feed .

@Sam the shyte was hilarious! both were great verses. I really like the Metallica line how long did it take you guys to type/write this?

Please leave some feedback http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=120210

as matt said his part well mine was a keystyle type of shit which got really good cuz it does not take more than 15 min to do a verse on bitches and fuck and yeah 15 minutes including the time to type it in.

[Sam.]

:laughing: DAMN! Sam you're verse wis hilarious!! (don't mean it in an insult, I mean it's funny), and demaz, that was a brilliant line:

rocking on the guitar like metallica
each time I rap it feels like nothing else matters HA.

hahaha good job both of ya, keep em comin

thanks bruh and yeah my verse was meant to be hilarious .

[Sam.]

LMAO, Demaz your verse you were obviously playing around so no need for feedback but it was great
Sam your verse was hilarious !! Great flow there as well .. obvious improvement from your other two pieces.

Fucking a-round is awesome.

thanks homie.

[Alex2012]

Perhaps It's not that but I have the capacity to seize the texts of others and to reinvent it differently. But it's maybe the aim, isn't it.So I saw here

the cops said demaz don't throw rocks [I understood Rock'n'Roll] at people's heads
not my fault they are yelling [I understood Heavy Metal] at me

she got my magic wand i like how she play these tricks

I don't say what I saw here.

and the rest of your verse is really very [deep].

You leave the spirit of yourself in your verses.


mdemaz, you made me laugh.
Sam, you made me float over clouds.

Good shit

[mdemaz]

I'm glad someone understood my vague metaphor.

[ArsheyHaq]

K, MCSam. To be honest, I didn't like your verse much. It seemed like you were trying too hard to be funny, unlike mdemaz, who was just playing around and came off sillier. Some of your rhymes were really forced too, to the point where it became an uncomfortable read for me. When it comes to overall skill level, you're better than mdemaz, but you need work on how to make your piece flow more smoothly. And this was the only part I liked about your verse because it had above decent rhymes:

"fantasies go off the top by the way we think ,
she got my magic wand i like how she play these tricks,
hollers my name louder shows how amazed she is,"