VBV & ArsheyHaq - Throwaway The Trash

[VenomBlackViper]

Thank you Sam, for providing in depth feedback rather than just making a joke about a smiley & leaving.

[Sam.]

Thank you Sam, for providing in depth feedback rather than just making a joke about a smiley & leaving.

i guess you mean this

Content? None of the shit i've posted here has ever been high on "content" i've only ever wrote 2 songs that could be considered emotional & both of them are unfinished, never been posted here & are meant to be audio pieces not writtens. Only difference here from my previous shit is that it wasn't as much of a horrorcore piece, although there are some areas where multis are being used to say something that isn't that impressive i'll admit that. Either way thanks for the feed.

let me say in some simple words well "content" unhhh consider you are telling a story that goes like
1
2
3
4
5
6

some thing like that okay ! one line leads to another but if you said some like this

1
2
3.g
4.r
5
6.x
g,r and x are some extra element you added to make it dope namely multis ,punches and wordplay etc

putting that to your case g.r and x were good but 1-6 were not good .

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[VenomBlackViper]

I know it seemed like I was being sarcastic, but I wasn't, I was legitimately thanking you for providing feedback rather than just joking about the smiley. However I said it in a sarcastic manner so you would misinterpret it.