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[B.A.D.]

so, with the new sections out I wanted to start at least to show my support on all of them, not just in audio Stage, so I decided to write some Poetic Hippity Hop Bullcrap with you all... comments would be appreciated



Hi, Rose...

I'm Axl Rose, I'll slash that rose out of your gun and rose
I rose as the sunshine flash holds light and tones the rose
I need a dozen of dancing shrub yellow bones within the rose
I Axe The Rose of Sharon before placed along Ax-D's stone with one rose
If I must pose as a rose to hide those red souls like petals on a rose
It must've been so insulting, but blood covers my hands and wets the rose
The highest in the Carson Range is the Rose. I saw pain in this rose
Martians Tainted this rose, it grows to the size of Rick Ross... fuck this rose

I rose out.

Rose.
by Big Ax-D

feedbuey links:
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viewtopic.php?f=24&t=120686

[B.A.D.]

well thanks a lot, I actually havent done text (at least like this) since 2003... but I guess what they say its true, if you can handle audio you can handle text haha.

thanks a lot brother, I appreciate that

[mdemaz]

Where's ilovebender.com when you need him?
He's a G&N nut..
Anyway, pretty nice piece here bro, you stuck to the theme like super glue, you used your multis in appropriate places, you even threw in some pop culture references too.
You must of done your homework when you wrote this man.
Props.

[B.A.D.]

Thanks Demaz, glad you liked this man

@Geno, well I tried to remember some stuff I saw in a literature class like 5 years ago. but the style I beleive is like a combination of others:

I think Clerihew style (poetry wise) & Quatrain (i think its spells like that)

but what its new that I haven't seen before is the monorhyme technique used like that. so I might aswell call it double-monorhyme.
8 rhyme verses all of them going a x a (a are the ose's, x is one that varies per verse)

but yup. Thats the best I can give out.

the topic in case you guys wonder is the "Amplitude of the Mind" (hence using a single word with several different meanings).

glad you fellers liked it