From Dust Til Dawn ~ Fa-Q Ft. BShady, C.R.E.A.M

[J.R.]

He's been ....uhh...inactive. So I dropped it.

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[Eminem - Hook]
Into the wee hours all night
And we dont stop until the sunlight
We just keep going cuz the die hard won’t go down without a fight
…Into the wee hours all night
And we dont stop until the sunlight
We just keep going cuz the die hard won’t go down without a fight

Can you feel your hair raising, your skin tingles,
Sweating bullets sounds like rain on tin shingles,
Plus the motha fucking house and roof's gone,
So whats rudolf gonna put his fucking hoof's on,
I can hear sounds of thousands of hands clapping,
Hair-brain schemes are just my strands wrapping,
And I am a euphemism to your shitty rapper name,
Your audience and mine, will never clap the same,
So watch as my presence slowly wraps the game,
Never stop, until every human quotes me verbatim,
'Til punctuation is burnt and my words make them,
Awoke a coma, choked from the thin smoke aroma,
I'll Bring the spliff to my lips, until I toke lymphoma,
Til I bash your skull with the panhandle of Oklahoma,
I'll be here until the sun goes down, and rises again,
Until Satan has a halo, and until God advises the sin,

My inhuman form of rap just pukes on your music
And when I make you feel stupid i'll even fry more of your cupids
Cause my music isn't made to love, it's made to encourage sex
Murder your influencing vets and influence you instead
Be the only musical pioneer until everyone's a fan
Then turn it into pop and Glee's just to make you look bad
That's what I do with my raps, I make it wise and strong
So suck it little bitch. Shit .. her mind got blown!
Call it a mind fuck, shitty punchlines on my brain
My shitty punchlines destroys your whole line of way far aim
Lightening struck the town when BShady is around
Thunder struck the town when ArsheyHaq is bout
To rap alongside Fa-Q, they fucking everyone's writtens
While Wyze-N's fucking late cause he's fucking your fucking bitches
Out of my senses, gonna leave an effect on my death
Cause i'm on my medicine when I wrote this shitty shit on the script
Cause menacing is a disease not anything you would desire
We die hard bruh ! Now prepare your soul to admire.

(Chorus)

Yo! I go so hard, I turn lesbians into heterosexuals,
Call my shit mind control, turn women into a vegetable!
Go listen to Soldier while your brain-dead, Put that shit on Repeat,
And then realize I attack like a hammerhead! Get ready to face defeat!
I was champion once, came back, now get ready for my three-peat!
I spin craniums with my sick explicit flow,
I fill these stadiums with bitches bro!
I don’t glow I radiate, Sorry ho I can’t be yours,
I already made a date so back away from the doors.
My girl's name is destiny, that's what my take over is,
So your career? Rest in peace, introduce older kids,
To my music and They're instantly hooked
Sign up for a concert, coincidentally ,It’s booked
But you’re just nailed to your seat,
You wanna walk away but you fail, you love what you see!
So you gonna stay and listen to the words B,
Cause I’m die hard and if you disagree,
I dare you to challenge my heart, please.

[ArsheyHaq]

This was very impressive, guys. This was probably the best I've seen, individually, from all of you. You guys keep getting better with every drop (that's the way it should be). I think I've read all of the work each of you has done, and did not think you all would be able to pull this off. I was wrong. I agree with Geno, it gelled really well. Each of you brought a different style to the table and made it one awesome, enjoyable read.

Fa-Q, this was not the best from you, but it was still really good. Flow-wise, it's better than anything I've ever read by you. Lyrically, it was a step down, because of the obvious fillers in the middle. The rhyming, though, was my favorite part about your verse. Very smooth. None of the rhymes felt forced, nor did I have to stretch any words while reading to make them rhyme.

"Awoke a coma, choked from the thin smoke aroma,
I'll Bring the spliff to my lips, until I toke lymphoma,
Til I bash your skull with the panhandle of Oklahoma"

^^The dope rhyming I was talking about^^

C.R.E.A.M., I really enjoy how you're not afraid to go somewhere with your rhymes, and do something/say something unprecedented. More often than not though it falls flat. I wish you'd practice your rhymes a little more, and then after you get better, make an attempt at your signature lyrical mayhem these were my favorite lines by you:

"My inhuman form of rap just pukes on your music
And when I make you feel stupid i'll even fry more of your cupids
Cause my music isn't made to love, it's made to encourage sex
Murder your influencing vets and influence you instead"

BShady14, I like your style

"I don’t glow I radiate, Sorry ho I can’t be yours,
I already made a date so back away from the doors.
My girl's name is destiny"

Pretty awesome line right there. I liked how you're attempting multis. Keep experimenting with them, I can see you're getting a good grasp on the concept. You did a nice job going along with the subject-matter at hand. I'm assuming though that Fa-Q was the one with the idea for this collab? And he probably had his verse done before you guys..?

I can't help but to wonder how would ArsheyHaq's verse be like haha.

I honestly don't think I would have done a very good job on this collab I was having trouble staying on topic lol guess I just wasn't feeling it.

[J.R.]

My verse was first finished, then Cream's then Fa'Qs. C.R.E.A.M wrote off the first version off mine as a guide for the song (My verse had 16 versions. worked hard)

Thanks arshey.

[Norway kills]

Who produced the beat?

[J.R.]

We really didn't write this piece to a beat, but if we did it'd be Dre~ Die hard.

[Fa-Q]

Thanks everybody for the feeds

[Sam.]

Fa-Q: Good rhymes there man as usual your multis delivered ,but tbh I really did not like the content as to what you wrote , it seemed to me that you some how lost the grip of the whole thing midway ,even though they rhymed perfectly the words fell flat and were not all impressive ,unlike your last drop which usually had some really dope quotable lines ,but that was lacking here .

C.R.E.A.M : That’s some dope shit right there man ,really liked this verse ,flow was a little h a bit but that’s okay ,the only complain that I have and what I feel you should do it work and put some new words ,look at fa-q’s verse  nice vocab ,nahimean ? .

BShady14: Decent piece there bruh ,nothing that impressive but yeah I see some Eminem influence in the beginning , liked that and also some swagged out lines like these :

My girl's name is destiny, that's what my take over is,
So your career? Rest in peace, introduce older kids,
To my music and They're instantly hooked
Sign up for a concert, coincidentally ,It’s booked

[Fa-Q]

Thanks Sam