Spacebound(parody)

[SeriallyIller]

Not sure if it qualifies for "creative writing"but oh well
Verse
Nobody knows me, I'm getting old,
walk down this road with bad bladder control,
It's no one's fault but my own,
it's the path I've chosen to go,
Broken as used rubber, I show no erection whatsoever so,
Don't ask me why I get no boner for these mo'fuckin' ho's
Cum lackin' carcass am i, what the fuck is up with this?
I've tried augmentation,but I ain't had no luck with this
It sucks, but it's exactly what I thought it would be
Like tryin' to start over
I've lost my viagra for some new kind of toaster,
Somethin' I won't go on, so you toy with my dildo, ho, it's over
It's like an dissapointment every time I hold ya, I wasn't jokin' when I told ya
You take my boner away, you're a supernova and I'm a
Chorus
I'm a bonerless ship and your muff's the moon
And I can't aim right at you, right at you
250,000 miles on a clear night in June
And I still can't aim right at you, right at you, right at you.

[SeriallyIller]

You need to post a link of feed before you can post.

If you fed my piece that'd be even better.

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=120828

Then I'll hit you back on this one.

uh what?

[J.R.]

Read the rules.

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=99315

#3 - You must provide a link of feed with your piece. It keeps the section active.

I bet he let's this die. but we'll see. hope he feeds our piece.

And yeah, great man.