Emotional Overflow

[J.R.]

Track 6~
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I sit and I think,
I hit and I drink,
Bit by bit, I sink and I sink,
Week after week I lose strength,
Lose money, borrow from the bank,
My girl? Fucking skank,
And I'm losing control,
Don't fit in anywhere I go,
It's awful, but I just can't cope,
I've give up all hope,

(Chorus):
Emotional overflow,
Over your shoulders and down your chest,
No control where it goes,
Emotional overflow

Verse 2:
Look I didn't mean to depress,
Don't be mistook, wishing for the best,
But it's not always an option doc,
My spiritual baggage is washing off,
Caution! You may get nauseous, I'm hurt,
Can't sleep, Can't eat, Can't work,
Down in the dirt, lookin up' skirts,
My tears flow, they squirt and they squirt,
Hurt is on maximum, blood checks?
Yeah I'm cashing em', No pants to be saggin' em,
All this pain is mashing up,
I'm about to stab my nuts!

(Chorus)

[J.R.]

Much better rhyming in the 2nd verse than the 1st. Almost seems unfinished with only 2 verses though. Did you have plans for a 3rd?

All in all, it was a cool piece, with a cool concept. Hmm..this concept kind of gives me an idea of my own.

The song is actually a huge ass metaphor, if I had a mic I would drop it like this, the guy rapping would sound so poor and tired, and running out of time, last chorus he would die.

So, yeah. It's pretty short.

[J.R.]

Oh cool, makes more sense now.

It could almost be used as like an album outro.

One of the three tracks (7-9) would show you why It's number 6. It...Fits great