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Postby PeNGuiN ZoMbiE » Aug 6th, '11, 19:13

i took like no time on this but i thought you guys might find it an interesting concept

Welcome to T.R, Shady baby we are a bunch of bizzare
fans called stans cos Eminem is the base of our hearts
when it comes to Eminem we are the king of the class by far
we'll genocide fourteen chaotic Eminem enemies with tar
this right here is proof of our stanliness for our superstar
people think we spit venom at haters but who are
they to put us in their mouth we'll cream them like a wet bar
and there are the facts so chow, now im out like a sports car

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Re: TR SHADY

Postby Sam. » Aug 6th, '11, 19:19

:laughing: nice flow ,that's all i can say since this is just for the lolz and :angry: on not being mentioned .
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Re: TR SHADY

Postby WakeUpShow » Aug 6th, '11, 23:34

thanks for the mention! my real name's chow.
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Re: TR SHADY

Postby PeNGuiN ZoMbiE » Aug 7th, '11, 03:57

MCSam wrote::laughing: nice flow ,that's all i can say since this is just for the lolz and :angry: on not being mentioned .


haha thanks and sorry man. if you really want i can extend it 8 more bars and include you lol

C.R.E.A.M wrote:Hahahahahaha thanks for the shoutout man. And yeah that's some nice flow, you seem like you didn't put effort on this and done it for the lulz so I can't really critic it.

Nice job man, you make TR proud. :worship:


haha well thank youu. you can critic all you want tho cos i dont give a fuuuuckkk!

Cosh wrote:thanks for the mention! my real name's chow.


i know this.. after all im the one who made it.. duhhh

and geno i gotchu haha. i picked mostly names i saw in this section and you got lucky!
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Re: TR SHADY

Postby Alex2012 » Aug 7th, '11, 22:07

Well Done! and Welcome! :flower:
I'm out of the matrix and I improved my music taste here, I opened my eyes and discovered so different ways to see the world, thanks to you all!

That started here:
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That will end here:
http://www.hiphopshelter.com/
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Re: TR SHADY

Postby PeNGuiN ZoMbiE » Aug 7th, '11, 22:24

Alex2012 wrote:Well Done! and Welcome! :flower:


thank you alex! :b: :wave:
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Re: TR SHADY

Postby ArsheyHaq » Aug 9th, '11, 03:48

Lol this was a fun piece to read. Wasn't much to it, except hopes of hearing one's name mentioned (which I wasn't :'( ) lol your flow, like others have said, was impeccable haha just wish you had more of a story/subject matter to it. For the most part, it was true though haha. I'm totally on this site because I'm a stan :zipped:
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Re: TR SHADY

Postby PeNGuiN ZoMbiE » Aug 9th, '11, 04:11

ArsheyHaq wrote:Lol this was a fun piece to read. Wasn't much to it, except hopes of hearing one's name mentioned (which I wasn't :'( ) lol your flow, like others have said, was impeccable haha just wish you had more of a story/subject matter to it. For the most part, it was true though haha. I'm totally on this site because I'm a stan :zipped:


haha sorry i didnt include you! now im actually thinking of making it 8 bars longer now! haha
im glad you liked it tho :happy:
if you could tho, just give me some feed back on the atrociousness labelled "Hip Hop Hit Man". if theres anything you dont understand please ask.
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