Track 6~ On the cross Ft. Geno

[J.R.]

Link of feed:
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=120949&p=1714955#p1714955

Beat:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0rgPKPSZ62A


(Intro)
1,000's of years ago..Jesus died for our sins,
Now here he lay on my necklace,
As I pray to be born again..

(Verse 1)
I usually don't pray, only when abandoned,
I've been branded, stranded, and auctioned,
Pissed off, lonely, proceed with caution,
Behind the curtain, I am not the man you see,
Blinded by hurtin, I am not who you wanna be,
And if you don't believe , I'm gonna make you see,
I feel like I spit awful, maybe this game ain't my cup of tea..


[Chorus - Geno]
On my journey I'm a lost soul, abstracted like Picasso,
My passion attracts the sadness like magic to the crossroad,
Where I'm handed second chances to man up and reach all goals,
Plans are ever standing as I hang faith up on the cross so..
x2

[Verse 2]
My desire to get rich, overwhelms my religion,
I gamble on shit, B, why can't you quit bidding?
Catching shit from my family, I can't breathe!
Wreckin my life, wishin I could just leave,
My hair looks awful, wish I wasn't livin, no fans for me,
Hey there B, why can't you quit hittin the bottle? No Sanity,
God please answer I'm sitting here askin, what is your plan for me?

[Chorus - Geno]
On my journey I'm a lost soul, abstracted like Picasso,
My passion attracts the sadness like magic to the crossroad,
Where I'm handed second chances to man up and reach all goals,
Plans are ever standing as I hang faith up on the cross so..
x2

[J.R.]

Oh damn it dropped.

Btw post the beat.

Posted,

Yeah, I only announce this shit in my thread

[J.R.]

This is the first time I've seen your verses for this. I think you did good.

I don't know if you planned this, but for this line:

I feel like I spit awful, maybe this game ain't my cup of tea..

I get the image of someone spitting out an "awful" cup of tea.

That works great imo.

That line, I reworked it so many times and was hoping someone would get it. It was a joke, lmao.

[BumShiv]

this shit is sick bro(s) . The first 3 lines really got me into it. Just wish it was longer !! And the first verse is a lot better now that Geno pointed out the cup of tea line Great hook Geno Overall, goodshit.

Please feed this

viewtopic.php?f=69&t=121037

[WakeUpShow]

[quote="BShady14"]
1,000 years ago..Jesus died for our sins,
lmao some Christian

[J.R.]

1,000 years ago..Jesus died for our sins,
lmao some Christian

Lmao, it was made like that to rhyme better, and it's a type-o. "1000's of years ago" is what it's suppose to say. and you can't just post that, it requires proper feed, but don't even fix it. Just shut the fuck up and get the fuck out.

lmao some smartass.

[Alex2012]

I had a little difficulty with the beat but it is certainly due to my bad pronunciation.
I like the story, it would be interesting to see a sequel, good metaphors,
nice intro and great chorus.

[Emadyville]

I liked the verses tho they were really short, I didnt check the beat but the flow seemed good for the verses and hook.

I liked that cup of tea line like geno pointed out, and the hook was cool, I loved that picasso/crossroads rhyme.

Good job guys

[J.R.]

I agree with Emady in regards to the length of the verses, but they seemed to flow nicely from what they were

As for the beat..........................

The first Hip-Hop song (if you will) I ever heard was Gangsta's Paradise...wow

Thanks, and yeah same here actually.

[Ka0t1c]

overall great message, definitely headin the right direction with this, not much to say that hasnt already been said, good job you guys