Fuck em' all- Track 8

[J.R.]

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=121531&p=1718661#p1718661 ~Feed

Fuck it, this is track 8. Feed, I'm bumping.

You see I got told my rhymes were simplistic,
but sometimes when I tried to deliver multis, I missed it, so I twisted it,
turned around and decided to form lyrical trinity, I've resisted fit's,
my house? Burned it down, another sin for me, Hell? I've enlisted bitch,
Taught my son how to drown a bitch, and my daughter how to be crowned a witch,
Tired of these 14 year old fags walking around in abrecombie and Fitch'.
fucking spoiled brats, Yeah, where the mommy who hits?
Oh shit, forgot to mix up my rhyme scheme ,
C'mon guys, where's my fucking design team?
Smashed a soda pop into my mom's face, think it was lime green,
I wouldn't advise fucking with me, C.R.E.A.M and Geno are on my team!
As Royce said I gotta talk my big dick,
I think it'll fit inside your slick clit,
If not we're gonna have to widen it,
Man up, It may hurt, but quit fighting it,
Aww, what's the matter, you frightened bitch?
Hey, I must be god, fucked a bitch while I'm writing this,
Tired of 14 year olds with no skill always biting shit,
So from here on out I'm just gonna tell em who's in charge,
When I run em' over in walmart with heavy bags in a cart,
Criminal mastermind, killing bitches, yeah, when do I start?
So when does the cock go down your throat?
When you decide to show the world the fucking note you wrote,
It said, "Shady, you're so fine, I want you in my mouth and pussy,"
Fuck me up and show this dirty whore where the roof be,
Time to go, gotta go fuck up this game harder than Snoop D.

[ArsheyHaq]

THIS I liked! It had some really funny lines with good rhyming. It did get a little redundant at times, but this is definitely a step in the right direction. Did you listen to my advice on changing subject matter? Or was this your own decision..

Taught my son how to drown a bitch, and my daughter how to be crowned a witch,

AHAH please write more like this

[J.R.]

Your advice. Ya know, my album live it up has got to be emotional, but illl write this on the lyrical trinity ep

[J.R.]

Eh, bump.

[J.R.]

Bump, track 8 on my album.