classthe_king wrote:Bump for all these new cats who need to learn a thing or two
SajN wrote:I always struggle to find the opening line of a verse...
People say just write whatever comes in your head, but it's not that easy. Especially not when I have a concept ready.
Help me master
SajN wrote:I always struggle to find the opening line of a verse...
People say just write whatever comes in your head, but it's not that easy. Especially not when I have a concept ready.
MCSam wrote:I always end up writing stories when i try to write abstract verses .
classthe_king wrote:MCSam wrote:I always end up writing stories when i try to write abstract verses .
What's the problem with that?
SajN wrote:Thanks for the answers to both of you
I'll try..
BTW Class, that line (I'm nice as fuck, just look at me) fit so well as the opening line for the verse I want to write (and had in my head while asking the question)
Damn it...
MCSam wrote:classthe_king wrote:MCSam wrote:I always end up writing stories when i try to write abstract verses .
What's the problem with that?
Let me put it this way :
Consider i wanna write some random things ,no matter what i do i end up making it a story ,which is not my intention . For eg. I am writing about moons and stars and as i make progress it turns into a story ,maybe i need to listen to more rappers who are experts in rapping about abstract topics,any suggestions ?
C.R.E.A.M wrote:I did this 7 syllable rhyme not long ago, I consider it my best bar ever lol :Everyday feels like a repeated suffocation
Climb the highest tower to be screaming "Fuck the nation"
Do you think I improved from my first piece (which I read it right now and it was a complete piece of shit lmao) ? And what do I need to be even better ?
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