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Re: LT ft. Alieus SliK & Innovation - Lyrical Massacre II

Postby Tash8 » Aug 20th, '11, 00:21

ego, verse is fire, vocab is well done and the words roll together well. especially at the end. :y: good shit
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Re: LT ft. Alieus SliK & Innovation - Lyrical Massacre II

Postby EyeSpick » Aug 20th, '11, 02:57

How about you guys get some mics and be big boys
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Re: LT ft. Alieus SliK & Innovation - Lyrical Massacre II

Postby Master Chief » Aug 20th, '11, 03:01

^ How is this dude not banned yet? Are the mods THAT stupid?

On another note, this was dope (duh). Everyone's rhyming was on point, that includes B and C.R.E.A.M. Innovation's part was real short, it was enjoyable though. Ego had that advanced vocab and the syllables game was tight. Good for what it was.
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Re: LT ft. Alieus SliK & Innovation - Lyrical Massacre II

Postby J.R. » Aug 20th, '11, 03:05

Geno wrote:
Master Chief wrote:^ How is this dude not banned yet? Are the mods THAT stupid?

On another note, this was dope (duh). Everyone's rhyming was on point, that includes B and C.R.E.A.M. Innovation's part was real short, it was enjoyable though. Ego had that advanced vocab and the syllables game was tight. Good for what it was.

He didn't do anything worthy of being banned, that I know of. Thanks for the feed. :wave:

Double account for sure Geno.

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Read it Eyespick. -.-
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Re: LT ft. Alieus SliK & Innovation - Lyrical Massacre II

Postby Master Chief » Aug 20th, '11, 03:06

Geno wrote:
Master Chief wrote:^ How is this dude not banned yet? Are the mods THAT stupid?

On another note, this was dope (duh). Everyone's rhyming was on point, that includes B and C.R.E.A.M. Innovation's part was real short, it was enjoyable though. Ego had that advanced vocab and the syllables game was tight. Good for what it was.

He didn't do anything worthy of being banned, that I know of. Thanks for the feed. :wave:

Double account sir.
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Re: LT ft. Alieus SliK & Innovation - Lyrical Massacre II

Postby EyeSpick » Aug 20th, '11, 04:35

>Gives honest advice and tells text people to actually make music and not waste their talent
>Everyone gets butthurt
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Re: LT ft. Alieus SliK & Innovation - Lyrical Massacre II

Postby EyeSpick » Aug 20th, '11, 05:39

Geno wrote:
EyeSpick wrote:>Gives honest advice and tells text people to actually make music and not waste their talent
>Everyone gets butthurt

I didn't. :wave:

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Re: LT ft. Alieus SliK & Innovation - Lyrical Massacre II

Postby J.R. » Aug 20th, '11, 14:27

I can't afford one. :coffee: I practice my delivery all the time, mostly, until I can. Thanks anyway Icepick.
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Re: LT ft. Alieus SliK & Innovation - Lyrical Massacre II

Postby EyeSpick » Aug 20th, '11, 22:15

If you're old enough to work at McDonalds 2 days a week you're fully capable of getting a decent mic in no time at all.
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Re: LT ft. Alieus SliK & Innovation - Lyrical Massacre II

Postby J.R. » Aug 20th, '11, 23:06

EyeSpick wrote:If you're old enough to work at McDonalds 2 days a week you're fully capable of getting a decent mic in no time at all.

If your smart enough to get a college degree you're kind of busy and if you're stupid enough to assume shit like you, you need to shut the fuck up until someone exposes your double account.
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Re: LT ft. Alieus SliK & Innovation - Lyrical Massacre II

Postby EyeSpick » Aug 21st, '11, 01:22

B.Nutz wrote:
EyeSpick wrote:If you're old enough to work at McDonalds 2 days a week you're fully capable of getting a decent mic in no time at all.

If your smart enough to get a college degree you're kind of busy and if you're stupid enough to assume shit like you, you need to shut the fuck up until someone exposes your double account.

I honestly don't understand how you people get mad so easily.
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Re: LT ft. Alieus SliK & Innovation - Lyrical Massacre II

Postby J.R. » Aug 21st, '11, 01:23

EyeSpick wrote:
B.Nutz wrote:
EyeSpick wrote:If you're old enough to work at McDonalds 2 days a week you're fully capable of getting a decent mic in no time at all.

If your smart enough to get a college degree you're kind of busy and if you're stupid enough to assume shit like you, you need to shut the fuck up until someone exposes your double account.

I honestly don't understand how you people get mad so easily.

We deal with a lot of dumbasses. Don't assume shit/ be a dumbass and we won't get mad. At least I won't.
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Re: LT ft. Alieus SliK & Innovation - Lyrical Massacre II

Postby EyeSpick » Aug 21st, '11, 01:26

If you're old enough to work at McDonalds 2 days a week you're fully capable of getting a decent mic in no time at all.

Honestly if you're going to lose your mind over a statement as general and non threatening as that you shouldn't even use the internet.
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Re: LT ft. Alieus SliK & Innovation - Lyrical Massacre II

Postby J.R. » Aug 21st, '11, 01:28

EyeSpick wrote:
If you're old enough to work at McDonalds 2 days a week you're fully capable of getting a decent mic in no time at all.

Honestly if you're going to lose your mind over a statement as general and non threatening as that you shouldn't even use the internet.

Never lost my mind, Didn't rage to a point it could be considered losing my mind, didn't even really react, tbh.
Now, feed with 3 paragraph long feedback for each verse/ chorus, or get out. We're going off topic.
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Re: LT ft. Alieus SliK & Innovation - Lyrical Massacre II

Postby EyeSpick » Aug 21st, '11, 01:39

B.Nutz wrote:
EyeSpick wrote:
If you're old enough to work at McDonalds 2 days a week you're fully capable of getting a decent mic in no time at all.

Honestly if you're going to lose your mind over a statement as general and non threatening as that you shouldn't even use the internet.

Never lost my mind, Didn't rage to a point it could be considered losing my mind, didn't even really react, tbh.
Now, feed with 3 paragraph long feedback for each verse/ chorus, or get out. We're going off topic.

Nah
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