[Bum Shiv]- Ghosts-(Hip Hop)

Website · by **BumShiv** » Aug 21st, '11, 05:51

Another Beat I made. Kinda like a Ghosts/Voices type beat. Please leave some feed back and tell me what you think and i will do the same :y:

Heres the link and Subscribe to me on Youtube :y:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mwi8Zce1 ... ideo_title

If you want it, feel free to ask :y:

btw, its better if you listen with headphones so you can hear the bass :y:

by **PeNGuiN ZoMbiE** » Aug 21st, '11, 07:16

hmm.. im trying to give you feed back but im not any where near an expert on beats. all i can say is that its not one i would rap over. its simple, simple isnt bad, but idk where im going with this. i'll probably be able to tell you more once i start recording and making my own beats. try to make beats that suck you in. where you can just feel the energy. for a ghost theme beat i think it could have maybe been spookier. this might not help but its my two pennies lol

Website · by **BumShiv** » Aug 21st, '11, 07:20

its all good bro lol when i was making this i wasnt going for ghostly or whatever. i was just making it and didnt know what to call it lol its prob misleading. thanks for feeding and listening :y:

by **Eedee** » Aug 21st, '11, 09:59

I really love this one, man!! I can totally see me doing some horrorcore over this beat. And the bells/chimes would be a quick little break in between some evil verses.

Nice job!

Send it to me if you like! :y:

by **B.A.D.** » Aug 21st, '11, 15:09

Man, you need to add more passion to them bro. You need to a solid bassline, better drums, do some mixing, this is plain raw. its not gonna sound good if you dont mix them, Fl Studio has some very powerfull tools for that, experiment a little more.
Thats just for the quality

now, for the melodies themselves, if you really want to be a producer you gotta learn scales man, cuz otherwise your melodies are going to keep sounding out of key.

you have nice ideas, but you need to execute them better :y:

Website · by **BumShiv** » Aug 21st, '11, 21:50

iight guys thanks for the advice. imma go fix that up in the beat rite now :y:

by **Eedee** » Aug 28th, '11, 20:08

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=124001

There's the thread! I made a song using the beat you sent me, bud. :y:

Good work on the beat!

by **Words** » Oct 10th, '11, 22:52

Damn

......all I can say, I love this beat. Can you send it to me?

Website · by **BumShiv** » Oct 11th, '11, 03:00

thanks bro. I'll pm it to you :y:

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