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Postby Matt Holck » Aug 21st, '11, 05:52

bombs scour and screech
a blizzard of meat
mismeasure the margin
sacrifice citizens
the ease of explosion
to erase all exception
destructions too easy
quick energy eruptions

keep constructive synergy
propel the peoples prodigy
focus on a world to feed
quit creating unquenched need
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Re: bombs scour and screech

Postby Matt Holck » Aug 22nd, '11, 20:01

the shreek in the city pity bare feet underneath
the swing of machetes pinning each entrance
to entrenched tunnels too small for human adults
would you send a child down those wild twisty tangles?
routes of ancient forest passages to what remains
cut the circulation before the poison becomes inflamed
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Re: bombs scour and screech

Postby Matt Holck » Aug 23rd, '11, 00:27

thanks for the feed
I thought this place allowed bumping every 24 hours

you can't be found when under ground
when out at night while up in town
where dark is light and light will blind
the surface world is left behind

we soon boil in paths airtight
wind to coils as asps will strike
in waiting for the dark night
to kill the king that calls for fight



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Re: bombs scour and screech

Postby VenomBlackViper » Aug 23rd, '11, 01:59

Matt Holck wrote:bombs scour and screech
a blizzard of meat
mismeasure the margin
sacrifice citizens
the ease of explosion
to erase all exception
destructions too easy
quick bursts of energy

keep constructive synergy
propel the peoples prodigy
focus on a world to feed
quit creating unquenched need


Matt Holck wrote:bombs scour and screech
a blizzard of meat
mismeasure the margin
sacrifice citizens
the ease of explosion
to erase all exception
destructions too easy
quick bursts of energy


Matt Holck wrote:a blizzard of meat


Matt Holck wrote:a blizzard of meat


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Re: bombs scour and screech

Postby Matt Holck » Aug 23rd, '11, 04:40

it is always easier to destroy than create
end game happen with North Korea developing a nuclear bomb

ever since industrial farms, humans have had enough to eat
money is still held tight which keeps the populous working
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Re: bombs scour and screech

Postby VenomBlackViper » Aug 23rd, '11, 04:50

Matt Holck wrote:it is always easier to destroy than create
end game happen with North Korea developing a nuclear bomb

ever since industrial farms, humans have had enough to eat
money is still held tight which keeps the populous working


Oh shitttttt that is dope, you're probably the best rapper on this site, holy fuck that is amazing. :worship:
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Re: bombs scour and screech

Postby DƎRDYPK » Aug 23rd, '11, 04:50

interesting
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Re: bombs scour and screech

Postby VenomBlackViper » Aug 23rd, '11, 04:52

DƎRDYPK wrote:Image


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Re: bombs scour and screech

Postby Sam. » Aug 23rd, '11, 11:28

The lines are weird but some concept in them tho .
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Re: bombs scour and screech

Postby Matt Holck » Aug 23rd, '11, 23:40

a constant conflict to match concept into to rhyme fits

take care beware the darkened hours
cower in your hut tonight
or join the fight to smite the blight
that rises from the sewer

walk in pairs or more
always be well armed
if you come upon a goblin,
hobble him before he runs

we march in hob nail boots
pound order underfoot
sound fear rattling to the root
of every goblin's thought
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Re: bombs scour and screech

Postby Matt Holck » Aug 27th, '11, 20:07

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Re: bombs scour and screech

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Aug 27th, '11, 21:35

What in the... :confusion:
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Re: bombs scour and screech

Postby Matt Holck » Aug 30th, '11, 01:48

lay low friend, don't offend, the city recently soar
let need find, proper time, for opportunity once more
you're wild and hasty
wasted your own nest
I want to be honest
I can't get behind this
desperation for justice
when messing with our shit
we live here! get it!
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Re: bombs scour and screech

Postby Matt Holck » Sep 4th, '11, 16:44

when I was younger and with another,
we never bothered to look forward
we wander together fingers tethered
parks and levees explored
no need for dreams endured
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Re: bombs scour and screech

Postby Man1x » Sep 4th, '11, 17:46

Your good but some of these lines just leave me mind fucked, idk. Something else these are.
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