P.S.A.

[Wreck]

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This is my P.S.A.- only mine, like my DNA
Like Nelly, I provide "hot shit,"- cal-i-ente (caliente)
Mics murdered, killed the flow like Ike Turner when he OD'd
S'mores metaphors, I'ma roast me, and tell the world to go fuck themselves, & to go see
A fucked up childhood turned me into a raged filled crazed-machine
Flow's "retarded", I'm half rain man, car's stalled, I need to brake-dance, so play the beat
A public service, the public's murdered, like a killing spree
went backstage at a MJ concert and asked who's feeling me
Skilled with heat, like the Lebron-Wade tandem
Get murked on public forums like Jay Daniels, like, whatever you say's random
"Here here", here's fags who's obsessed with ponies, but not-you-Kez
Like Cube, I got you in check, so let me pop you for a sec
Here's the smoking-gun, I'm just poking-fun, at these self-loathing-cunts
I'm never to be fucked with, like an open-Nun, you're both hopeless, I'm done.

[JamaicanPattlez]

Very nicely done, very unique. I like the flow! Feedback on mine? Thanks! viewtopic.php?f=24&t=123753

[Wreck]

Very nicely done, very unique. I like the flow! Feedback on mine? Thanks! viewtopic.php?f=24&t=123753

Thank you man, I appreciate it. And definitely bro, I got you.

[Kez]

"Here here", here's fags who's obsessed with ponies, but not-you-Kez

Blatantly only found this by being egotistic and searching my own name. No fuck given.

[Matt Holck]

search my name is the quickest way for me to get myself together

[Wreck]

Subliminal?

Nah man. I was talking about you, but I was poking fun at the whole situation, I didn't mean it. E-Beef is ridiculous to me tbh, but yeah, if you're cool, I'm cool.

[Wreck]

"Here here", here's fags who's obsessed with ponies, but not-you-Kez

Blatantly only found this by being egotistic and searching my own name. No fuck given.

I wasn't dissing you though, chill. And lmao at the pic.

[Wreck]

Subliminal?

Nah man. I was talking about you, but I was poking fun at the whole situation, I didn't mean it. E-Beef is ridiculous to me tbh, but yeah, if you're cool, I'm cool.

I'm cool if you're okay with me taking comical shots (non-disease-related) at you in my next track.

Yeah I'm definitely cool with that, I like little friendly competition, I wouldn't even call it competition. I was just reading an article on the behind the scenes look at Big's Life After Death record & how he put in one light subliminal towards Nas about the King of New York shit, but they was cool, it was just a hip hop thing, you know.

[ArsheyHaq]

This was dope Rhymes, flow, punchlines,--everything was good. Your style is kinda weird lol but it's good to see something not so formulaic. The MJ and the Heat lines were my favorite. Nice finisher too. Dunno what else to tell you except to post more often

[Wreck]

This was dope Rhymes, flow, punchlines,--everything was good. Your style is kinda weird lol but it's good to see something not so formulaic. The MJ and the Heat lines were my favorite. Nice finisher too. Dunno what else to tell you except to post more often

Thanks man, I appreciate the honest feed, & the love. I just love punchlines, & shit like that, but my style is different cause I break it down & mix styles, but thanks again.

I just posted a new one if you wanna check that out, but thanks Arshey .

And I def. will .

[Wreck]

That MJ line was hilarious

This was a very good piece, gotta be honest, I haven't read much from you aside from that old rap battle tourny. I'll definitely peep your shit more often, homie Good stuff. Nothing to really critique here, keep it up!

Wow thanks for the feed, and the love Menzo, I always respect your opinion & posts on these forums, & not even because you posted here on my shit; just sayin.

Yeah the MJ line I really liked too lol. I'm glad you enjoyed that line. I just wanna prove people wrong, about being lyrical, I think I can pull it off.

I got another new verse I wrote in here today Menzo if you wanna check it out bro. Thanks again.

[Ka0t1c]

haha, pretty clever man, good to read some creative pieces for once

[Wreck]

haha, pretty clever man, good to read some creative pieces for once

thanks bro, I appreciate it .