This is a keystyle just for fun. I could honestly care less about feedback. Just read it and enjoy, ya'll!
You think that you're all alone, and you prolly don't-/
even know that you were being followed home/
'till a solid chrome bat smashes your collar bones/
and I steal enough dollars out of your wallet to pay all of my college loans/
so drop and give me 50...BUCKS! I ain't no drill sergeant/
and hurry! Unless you want your killed carcass wrapped in a silk carpet/
and your face on tomorrow's milk cartons/
pussy, now the only time you'll feel hard's when you're dead with rigor mortis!/
but shit, I'm gettin' hard just lookin' at your chick, "You're gorgeous!/
I'll eat that ass right here on the kitchen floor, bitch/
it's as good as done--stick a fork 'n it/
my dick's enormous, and your pussy's tight so what's crackalatin'?/
You look attractive, baby/
let's dip, I got more whips than the backs of blacks back in slavery/
nahhhhh, I'm just actin' crazy/
but seriously, I'm hot as shit--Satan sent me a batch of daisies/
so I killed Patrick Swayze and told his 'Ghost' to take 'em back to Hades/
cuz I play hard to get, but my dick's as hard as shit!/
So let's fuck and just save time/
wait a minute, wait a minute! Did everything I just say rhyme?? /..cool"
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