Sick Fuck

[Wreck]

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I'm a hopeless bastard, I'll tie a rope around your casket & throw it in your attic
I'm still smoking your ashes since my last hit, choking like B-Rabbit, I'm a prodigy causing havoc
Still as sick like Charles Manson, eat a corpse, & beat a body in a morgue
That's my hobby, not a sport, I'll stab your body in the lobby with a fork
Still stealing from the homeless, while I'm video taping Bin Laden
on a island with iscariots, causing violence- sins & miscon-duct
Red Rum red rum, fire to the White house, I set one
Burn a hole through your flesh, while you fuck Judge Judy, no objection
Blood clots, blood shot eyes after 8 balls, bloody chainsaws
Break-jaws, shave-balls, a midget fucks your mom with his nuts- length-tall
Robbed-a-bank, stuck the money in your mother & father's prada-bag
Alotta fags, need to go now like melted lava, & body bags
Kiss-my-Irish-cheeks, with a pirate's teeth, while he's tired asleep
a wired-creep, I slash his tires while my boss fires me

[ArsheyHaq]

Seems like this was just one of those just-fuckin'-around type of raps you did just for fun. Correct me if I'm wrong. Some parts were pretty ill, but then they were followed by lines that didn't have any business being there. If you need me to point out which lines specifically I will, but I think they're pretty obvious. Rhyming was good though, and was the high-point of the piece (which it should be). Except, having trouble figuring out if 'Laden' is supposed to rhyme with 'conduct'..? Overall, it was a fun piece to read, with some pretty witty/funny lines. Here are my favorites:

"I'm a hopeless bastard, I'll tie a rope around your casket & throw it in your attic
I'm still smoking your ashes since my last hit, choking like B-Rabbit, I'm a prodigy causing havoc
Still as sick like Charles Manson, eat a corpse, & beat a body in a morgue
That's my hobby, not a sport, I'll stab your body in the lobby with a fork"

and

"Burn a hole through your flesh, while you fuck Judge Judy, no objection"

[Wreck]

Seems like this was just one of those just-fuckin'-around type of raps you did just for fun. Correct me if I'm wrong. Some parts were pretty ill, but then they were followed by lines that didn't have any business being there. If you need me to point out which lines specifically I will, but I think they're pretty obvious. Rhyming was good though, and was the high-point of the piece (which it should be). Except, having trouble figuring out if 'Laden' is supposed to rhyme with 'conduct'..? Overall, it was a fun piece to read, with some pretty witty/funny lines. Here are my favorites:

"I'm a hopeless bastard, I'll tie a rope around your casket & throw it in your attic
I'm still smoking your ashes since my last hit, choking like B-Rabbit, I'm a prodigy causing havoc
Still as sick like Charles Manson, eat a corpse, & beat a body in a morgue
That's my hobby, not a sport, I'll stab your body in the lobby with a fork"

and

"Burn a hole through your flesh, while you fuck Judge Judy, no objection"

Thanks for the feed bro. The Judge Judy line was my least favorite tbh, but about the Laden line, a lot of people make it rhyme a little bit. Also, Eminem used accents so that certain rhymes were easier to rhyme with words they normally wouldn't rhyme exactly with, so he was able to get away with it. Those 2 didn't rhyme, you're right, I should of edited it, but I liked the line regardless.

Appreciate it you breaking it down though, thank you .

[Wreck]

Actually I take back what I said about the Laden line, Bin Laden and miscon rhyme mostly, that's why I put it like that, misconduct doesn't rhyme with Bin Laden, but that's why I put the dash in between. That was on purpose so that THEY did rhyme. Just wanna clarify that, I forgot to look at that before I responded to your feed.

[ArsheyHaq]

Actually, now that I say it to myself I can totally hear "misconduct" and "Bin Laden" rhyming. Good find

[Wreck]

Actually, now that I say it to myself I can totally hear "misconduct" and "Bin Laden" rhyming. Good find

Thanks bro.

[Wreck]

Bumpp

[Ka0t1c]

dude, i enjoyed it, i really did, sounds like you're getting into horror core, i think you can get deeper with this piece but for what it is, i say you wrote it pretty well, looking forward to seeing more good drops by you.

[Wreck]

dude, i enjoyed it, i really did, sounds like you're getting into horror core, i think you can get deeper with this piece but for what it is, i say you wrote it pretty well, looking forward to seeing more good drops by you.

wow thanks for the love man, & the honesty as well, appreciate it. I definitely will drop more shit soon, most definitely. Thanks again.