Bed Time Rhymes

[Man1x]

Feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=124174&p=1743165#p1743165

[Verse]

Fuck it I think just I’m about to let loose/
Cause I just finished drowning in red goose/
Went ahead and killed a prick filled med group/
Tapped into secruity, now im in the feds loop/
Dead drouping dickheads piled in my basement/
Faggot, your next after I go to the body case rent/
Maggots crawling over da bodyies and gray vents/
Bags, pots, dead dogs, guns, and brave men/
Have all found a grave, ending in my living room/
So be scared knowing I’m coming soon/

[Outro]

{Gun Shot}
{Head Splater}

Hahahaha, told you.




Any feed would be appreciated mates

[Man1x]

Yeah, no problem. Oh and what you mean by train myself?

[Man1x]

Gotcha, I wrote this in five minutes. Compaired to my other five minute rhymes I know I have improved. I'm working on a good verse imo though. Don't know when that will be done. Thanks for feed.

[Man1x]

Get ready for it. Bummm bumm bump!

[Wreck]

Feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=124174&p=1743165#p1743165

[Verse]

Fuck it I think just I’m about to let loose/
Cause I just finished drowning in red goose/
Went ahead and killed a prick filled med group/
Tapped into secruity, now im in the feds loop/
Dead drouping dickheads piled in my basement/
Faggot, your next after I go to the body case rent/
Maggots crawling over da bodyies and gray vents/
Bags, pots, dead dogs, guns, and brave men/
Have all found a grave, ending in my living room/
So be scared knowing I’m coming soon/

[Outro]

{Gun Shot}
{Head Splater}

Hahahaha, told you.




Any feed would be appreciated mates

This was dope. I like the dark theme of it, and the flow was nice, and the metas were good too. Props. Keep grinding, this was good .

[Man1x]

This was some Relapse inspired shit

Thanks for feed man