Hip Hawp

[Man1x]

Dope, rhymes were great and you got a good flow. It's not your best work though but I'll take that cause you were bored. Good anyways, definitely better than mine.

[Mr.DGAF]

Nice drop. The rhyming was pretty solid, nothing spectacular but still pretty good. The idea was good and you executed well, the flow was really good too. Actually probably the stand-out, for me, on this one. It all rolled off the tongue pretty easily.

[WakeUpShow]

Ummm there was only one multi in the entire piece (isn't a chance/hitting his back) unless that's what you were going for, you really have to step your game up.

[Man1x]

haha, that must hurt. And hey Cream can you feed me? : http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=124536

[WakeUpShow]

Nice drop. The rhyming was pretty solid, nothing spectacular but still pretty good. The idea was good and you executed well, the flow was really good too. Actually probably the stand-out, for me, on this one. It all rolled off the tongue pretty easily.

Thanks bro.

Ummm there was only one multi in the entire piece (isn't a chance/hitting his back) unless that's what you were going for, you really have to step your game up.

Wizuff is up to scare masses with his attacks
Menacing, but showing aspects of hating that..
typical "nuts inside your asses" lyrics and raps
Shit is enough, i'm bringing no dances to this shit track
Pistol and bucks? i'd rather go catch a pistol and bang
I'm sick of these fucks, bringing no talent, getting the cash
Shitty Rick Ross, looking like pandas, eating more ham
I'm dismissing my chances of being attached ..
To the list of top rappers, there isn't a chance
But i'm lyrically pumped, coming with axes hitting your back
Is it enough? Underground rappers aren't that pop
Hope they'll grow tough, before they massacre the game of Hip Hop

I wasn't going for end-rhymes. I wanted to create a sound around the whole piece, I tend to focus more on the sound than the technicalities, nahmean? and even if so, there's more than one lol.

appreciate you passing by though!

ok, fair enough, didn't catch those. although the shitty rick ross is a stretch.