Turning To You

[Wreck]

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Troubled again, why don't you hug me again, I'm lovely with pens
So I can "right" for days, go left, go long in life w/ buddies & friends
So I'm turning to you, just like a car hitting you straight
You know how many hardships we've faced, we've been through the hardest mistakes
I'm startled w/ fate, I hope we end up together, forever in the end
I wrote a letter to friends, telling them how much better I've been
Tackle my "problems", like "the rock" hitting some math equations
I've had past relations, but you're the only one that matters, so baby I ask for patience
I've seen & done it all, I'll never run or fall, or bawl & stall
Ran through the rain, to finally love life in the sun, finally, & after all
I turn to you like miss Christina, life is a bitch- shit, you should of seen her
I'd never miss my dreams of, walking our beautiful daughter down the aisle, you're my queen
One more time, my family- I love you all, forever, with tears, & smiles
I never fear- so "Kyle,"- my guardian angel I can rely on, just like the Bible


Wanted to go the real sh1 more so then just lyrical spitting random metaphors, but tried to incorporate lyricism as best as I could as well.

Feed is appreciated, thank you.

[autotooner]

looks good. I like this part:

I'm startled w/ fate, I hope we end up together, forever in the end
I wrote a letter to friends, telling them how much better I've been
Tackle my "problems", like "the rock" hitting some math equations
I've had past relations, but you're the only one that matters, so baby I ask for patience

[Wreck]

looks good. I like this part:

I'm startled w/ fate, I hope we end up together, forever in the end
I wrote a letter to friends, telling them how much better I've been
Tackle my "problems", like "the rock" hitting some math equations
I've had past relations, but you're the only one that matters, so baby I ask for patience

Thanks bro for the feed & for the love, appreciate it.

[J.R.]

Amazing drop my friend

[Wreck]

Amazing drop my friend

Thank you man, I appreciate it .

[SG.]

I liked it overall, however, I think some of the rhyming was a bit forced, like in the last two lines. But I really liked it. I'll be turning to you for more! (That was shit.)

[Wreck]

I liked it overall, however, I think some of the rhyming was a bit forced, like in the last two lines. But I really liked it. I'll be turning to you for more! (That was shit.)

Thank you, I appreciate the feed bro .