Geno - Leaving The Past

by **Mr.DGAF** » Sep 6th, '11, 02:19

Dude, you are honestly my favorite textcee here. Your rhyming is always top notch and you've got a solid vocabulary too. Granted, I haven't been around long, but your pieces are definitely my favorite here.

I'm on a phone now so I'm limited on how much I can post, but I'll give more feed tomorrow on the actual piece.

by **Man1x** » Sep 6th, '11, 03:24

Another great verse like always :y:

And really there is no more I see from my view on how you could improve. Maybe start writing pro poetic bars like Jay-Z or bashing celebs like Eminem but really I feel you got to a point where you should just pic up the mic and start rapping. I would like to see how well you write hooks though cause we don't ever see any from you. :shifty:

by **Man1x** » Sep 6th, '11, 05:01

Oh, alright. I will tomorrow. I just havn't seen any on the threads ive seen from you but i'll be sure to check it out :y:

by **Matt Holck** » Sep 6th, '11, 05:13

Or maybe just nervous instead, I wonder why I even try,
To equalize my feeble life to come and find these people's lies,

so tired of liars compiling diversions as to why they are ringing the division bell again
deny that they hide from what sings on the side closing fine muse to the detail
find excuse to derail

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by **Man1x** » Sep 8th, '11, 05:13

Hey, hit me and Sam back up?: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=124762

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