That was great. Good subject, good flow, good everything really. Would've loved for it to be a bit longer though.
Yeah, if you could feed that link Sam posted I'd also appreciate it.
Nothin's Changed (PROBABLY MY BEST PIECE YET)
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Re: Nothin's Changed (PROBABLY MY BEST PIECE YET)
by SG. » Sep 9th, '11, 23:57
Menzo wrote:Lmao, you gotta love Zabe / SG...guy's so underrated.
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Re: Nothin's Changed (PROBABLY MY BEST PIECE YET)
by Matt Holck » Sep 10th, '11, 02:48
bitching about others
calling their souls worthless
without much explanation
meh
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=123201
calling their souls worthless
without much explanation
meh
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=123201
NO WAR
pm me all deleted posts I make
pm me all deleted posts I make
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Re: Nothin's Changed (PROBABLY MY BEST PIECE YET)
by VenomBlackViper » Sep 10th, '11, 02:51
Matt Holck wrote:bitching about others
calling their souls worthless
without much explanation
meh
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=123201
Hey, shut the fuck up, that is all.
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Re: Nothin's Changed (PROBABLY MY BEST PIECE YET)
by Man1x » Sep 10th, '11, 03:30
VenomBlackViper wrote:Matt Holck wrote:bitching about others
calling their souls worthless
without much explanation
meh
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=123201
Hey, shut the fuck up, that is all.
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Re: Nothin's Changed (PROBABLY MY BEST PIECE YET)
by Matt Holck » Sep 10th, '11, 03:41
wouldn't want to tell anyone they're a coddled wash up complaining about not being understood
calling people hypocrites
means nothing without context of action
or is that just "that everyone is lazy"
calling people hypocrites
means nothing without context of action
or is that just "that everyone is lazy"
NO WAR
pm me all deleted posts I make
pm me all deleted posts I make
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Re: Nothin's Changed (PROBABLY MY BEST PIECE YET)
by VenomBlackViper » Sep 10th, '11, 04:34
Matt Holck wrote:wouldn't want to tell anyone they're a coddled wash up complaining about not being understood
calling people hypocrites
means nothing without context of action
or is that just "that everyone is lazy"
Go wash the dishes bro.
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Re: Nothin's Changed (PROBABLY MY BEST PIECE YET)
by RainMan44 » Sep 10th, '11, 06:55
Everyone, thanks for the feeds 
I'll feed all of you who wanted me to return the favor soon
@Matt Holck
I'm talking about grown ups bitching about us and not even showing us what we SHOULD DO. Don't say it's "meh" with no explanation buddy. I can accept a bad review or w/e, but explain why.
@VenomBlackViper Good lookin' out, ma man
I'll feed all of you who wanted me to return the favor soon
@Matt Holck
I'm talking about grown ups bitching about us and not even showing us what we SHOULD DO. Don't say it's "meh" with no explanation buddy. I can accept a bad review or w/e, but explain why.
@VenomBlackViper Good lookin' out, ma man
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."
GOAT
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Re: Nothin's Changed (PROBABLY MY BEST PIECE YET)
by Sam. » Sep 10th, '11, 12:31
That's odd you posted this piece a long time ago and seeing what others have said ,i don't thionk you need any more criticism ,but since i have read your piece imma give it a feed since you seem to be starving like a Somalian Kid .
Was joking on the last part though ,i must say that you have delivered a pope piece not only that the underlining message of the verse is well done and executed ,good job there .
The only complaint is that multis seemed forced at places , specially the initial part of the verse .
But i must admit the way you cemented those multis in the structure made it easier for me to flow with .
Keep at it bruh .
Was joking on the last part though ,i must say that you have delivered a pope piece not only that the underlining message of the verse is well done and executed ,good job there .
The only complaint is that multis seemed forced at places , specially the initial part of the verse .
But i must admit the way you cemented those multis in the structure made it easier for me to flow with .
Keep at it bruh .
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